Posted February 18
This week's picture comes courtesy of Sandra Crook. Rochelle hosts as ever.
As usual, his alarm rang at 07.45.
Harry was a creature of habit. He went down the stairs, plucked his newspaper from the letterbox, and walked to the kitchen. Put bread in the toaster, water in the kettle, tea leaves in the pot. Cracked an egg into simmering water and flipped over his timer. Sat down and scanned the crossword clues.
Harry was a creature of habit. He went down the stairs, plucked his newspaper from the letterbox, and walked to the kitchen. Put bread in the toaster, water in the kettle, tea leaves in the pot. Cracked an egg into simmering water and flipped over his timer. Sat down and scanned the crossword clues.
He liked his breakfast at 08.10.
His cleaner arrived at 11.45 precisely. She found the bread standing to attention half toasted, the egg part-cooked, the kettle lukewarm. The sand in the egg timer had stopped flowing halfway. Harry was slumped in his chair.
And the clock had stopped at 08.08
And the clock had stopped at 08.08
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Aww, poor Harry! I really like this line..'She found the bread standing to attention...' Great story! Wonderfully written! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much.
DeleteSeems a very fitting end for one so precise. I'm rather pleased for Harry - non fuss, neat, clean and pragmatic. ;)
ReplyDeleteDear Keith,
ReplyDeleteHarry gave new meaning to "creature of habit." Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle
DeleteOh, that's an interesting visual! Very good.
ReplyDeleteThanks Annalisa. Look forward to seeing you at the A-Z Challenge in April!
DeleteDeath has a way to break life long habits. Well done.
ReplyDeleteDying is not something we are in the habit of doing!
DeleteA time and a place for everything I guess. Poor Harry.
ReplyDeleteHis time, his place. Thanks for the inspiring picture Sandra.
DeleteThere are the time when time simply stops.. For Harry habits ended here...
ReplyDeleteIndeed they did Hank.
DeleteFor everything there is a purpose and a time. Harry found his.
ReplyDeleteTurn turn turn. Thanks for dropping by.
DeleteGreat writing, Keith. I found this fitting that everything was in a state of noncompletion, simply because he wasn't there to finish it. Well done.
ReplyDeleteAmy took the words right off my keyboard (and said it better than I could). I too loved how the timers just stopped when he died. Discipline right into death. Wonderful tale.
ReplyDeleteWhat a story! Time literaly stopped with him and for him.
ReplyDeleteBlack humor and a bit scary. Time stopped and stayed stopped when he died. I think I'd stay out of that house until an investigation was made. It's a bit like visiting the "Twilight Zone". I've probably seen too many weird TV shows. :) --- Suzanne
ReplyDeleteYou have such a gift for capturing a moment in time. In this case, it's quite literal! Well done.
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