Posted Saturday October 1
‘Stand tight’ hollered boatman Gideon. Hercules his trusty horse tugged on the rope with
all his might, stretching it then standing four square waiting for the barge
to move. ‘Forward’ ordered Gideon as he slung the beast’s lead over his
shoulder, and once again their daily journey along the canal was under way.
Like his father and his father before
him, Gideon transported grain in the timeworn narrow-boat Marion. In foul
weather or fair, on billowing or waters still, Gideon went about his work uncomplaining. Through
locks, under bridges, along the muddy towpath.
Gideon never had a son to pass the barge
on to, nor a wife or mistress even. So after mooring Marion for the last time,
with his silver blade he carved his initials and the date on the cabin door. ‘You
done well ‘ole gal’ he whispered.
As Gideon sat on bench outside the Plank
and Leggit Inn, tankard in hand, watching the next generation of boatmen trudging
by he reflected on his past. He had been contented but then he knew nothing
else.
~
‘How old is she?’ asked the father, ushering
his wife and excited kids onto the canal boat.
‘Marion? We are not entirely sure,
but she was a working barge until July 1926’ said the captain pointing to the cabin
door ‘Make yourselves comfortable and enjoy our cruise’ He fired up the motor, spun
the wheel and set off.
For The Sunday Whirl where the given words are grain, lock, barge, filter, wisp,
spin, blade, reflect,
billow, shoulder, fin and bridge
.
Nice!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, Keith!
ReplyDeleteSusan at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
How delighted we would be to know the history of old things, whether it be canal boats or jewellery. Researching family history often reveals some gems as well.
ReplyDeleteMaybe the names but there is something biblical about Gideon leading the reins and leaving a part of history behind
ReplyDeleteIn contrast to Old Egg's comment, how cool would it be to know how are things are passed on in the future? I wonder what Gideon would think of Marion's new life.
ReplyDeleteOne wonders how many people who take pleasure trips on old transport even pause to consider the history of them. Very entertaining.
ReplyDeleteI have a friend who owns a long boat, and we often take it through the canals in London. Makes for a great day out in the summer. A bit too cold though, once autumn arrives.
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