His vegetables
always won awards at the village produce show. From the smallest brussel
sprout to the massive orange pumpkin he wheeled in his barrow to the village hall each autumn, he was always the prize winner.
Yet unbeknown
to us, beyond his polished brass doorknob lived a different person. Since his
marriage apparently ended in acrimonious circumstances, a happy and contented soul
he was not.
Partial as he
was to a drink or two, no one foresaw what he was to do that chill winters
night. He sat before the blazing log fire in the Dog and Duck listening to his
dreams crackle then disappear in a cloud of smoke; his hopes sizzle then
fall as grey ash. I saw him shuffle a handful of photographs, then take one from
centre and gaze at it for what seemed ages. I watched as he dropped something
into his glass before swirling then swallowing its lethal contents.
Next year there
is to be a new top prize at the village produce show; a special award named
after the man behind the mask, the man none of us really knew.
For Sunday's Whirligig where the given words are swallow, doorknob, sizzle, marry, partial,
swirling, orange, shuffle, blazing, crackle, vegetables and smallest
.
Intense snippet! Well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Keith - sad story ... but so believable ... it is that time for veggie and fruit shows ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteIt is amazing how many people are like this. Not necessarily suicidal but are two different people; one an affable face to most but secretly a troubled person. How would I know...just guess!
ReplyDeleteThose crackling dreams going up in smoke got me - i think there are lots of us being somebody different depending on which side of the door we are
ReplyDeleteThis short story stabbed me awake! Great writing, Keith!
ReplyDeleteimagination is cool here.
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