This is my 100 word story which was inspired by the picture of mushrooms at Friday Fictioneers
‘Look Mummy, the fairies are back! They are dancing round
and round’
She often saw them, but all I could ever see was a ring of
mushrooms in the grass.
I never told her.
Maria was born
poorly. Unable to walk unaided, she used to sit for hours on end leaning on a
fence reading, singing, imagining, and talking to fairies.
We knew her life would be short, but the end came far sooner
than we expected.
This morning when I opened the curtains I saw a ring of
fairies dancing round and round. The prettiest of all was Maria
picture: fairies by the 1 cutemetalchick at deviantART
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poignant and beautiful
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and touching. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThat last phrase echoes with hopeful finality...beautiful!
ReplyDeleteAwwww...that was beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWhat a charming end. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteA very poetic fairy tale ... the end leaves us with a great feeling of joy and hope. Thank you for participating.
ReplyDeletebeautiful; i still luv fairy tales
ReplyDeletemuch love....
The last sentence brought a tear to my eye. Beautiful
ReplyDeleteOh, so happysad.
ReplyDeleteOh, so happysad.
ReplyDeleteThis is so heart-breaking and beautiful all at once
ReplyDeletemindlovemisery
Oh no! :( But it's brilliant, Keith!
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and sad. More fairies for grown- ups please. I love it!
ReplyDeleteDear Keith,
ReplyDeleteYou've painted a sweet picture in few words. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
A very bittersweet story.. really made a few teardrops come..
ReplyDeleteVery touching and beautiful story.
ReplyDeleteA sweet story with just the right level of sweetness.
ReplyDeletejanet
Aw, what a moving story you've created here. So much emotion!
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