For Poetry Jam where the theme is Loneliness and Solitude
sitting
quietly
in a corner
sobbing
tears flowing
down her cheeks
alone
mind searching
for a reason
confused
wondering
why did he leave
suddenly
joy
happiness
now all gone
crying
trembling
curled in a ball
inconsolable
others
ignore her
it’s like
she’s
invisible
Very effective pain images here. A different take on solitude - unique!
ReplyDeleteYour poem made me think of how children feel and cry when something happens to them and their siblings hardly pay any attention.
ReplyDeleteInsightful. Tis in the nature of the beast to be indifferent to the pain and suffering of others.Of course therre ae always the few exceptions who write about it. Enjoyed this one !
ReplyDeleteQuite sad, I think, to be crying and have others totally ignore you. I definitely feel the pain in this one.
ReplyDeleteWhen we are uncared for & ignored, we feel we are invisible.
ReplyDeleteReally painful;. Hope no one suffers this...
Well expressed :)
Lovely diamantes,
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
powerful and a amazing insight and image of the brokenness within. Well done
ReplyDelete"curled in a ball" & "she's / invisible" speak volumes for her loneliness caused by her separation...wonderful imagery used here...
ReplyDeletei can relate to this..
ReplyDeletesad situation powerfully expressed
ReplyDeleteLoneliness
quite sad....well done.
ReplyDeleteShe is a braveheart, and won't let this engulf her. A touching one!!!
ReplyDeleteI hope this isn't auto-biographical! Very sad.
ReplyDeleteI hope this isn't auto-biographical! Very sad.
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