Written for Tale Weaver Prompt where we are to write short story with this image Sunday Skeleton by Lucas Grogan for inspiration...
I'm writing this down with pen on paper before I go to bed so that when I wake in the morning and see it on my desk I'll know it wasn't a dream.
It's a bitter February evening. I am desperate to get to the warmth of my home so I take a short cut though the cemetery. The air is as
still as the graves that surround me. It’s dark yet everything around glistens
white in the harsh winter frost.
So bright is the moonlight that long black shadows
stretch out from the headstones lining the path. My
own walks alongside me for company in this desolate place.
I see the vague figure of a man coming towards me.
He wears a hooded cloak and although he becomes clearer in the moonlight as he
approaches, I am unable to make out his face. It has no substance, just a hollow void.
As we pass I nod my head in greeting, but it’s as
if he doesn't see me. I look over my shoulder and notice he has no shadow, and
leaves no footprints in the virgin snow.
Suddenly I am blasted with a rush of freezing wind
that stings my face. A hooded cloak tumbles past me. Then the wind stops as
suddenly as it started.
I turn around and I see a skeleton lying prostrate
on the path. I must be imagining it. I am
dreaming. I must be dreaming. But I’m not, this really is happening.
I screw closed my eyes, wait a few seconds, and when I
open them it has gone. Now I know it wasn’t real.
And then, before me, I see the cloak suspended from
the branches of a tree. One arm is waving at me, mocking me, pointing at me.
Scaring me.
I run. I dash between the gravestones desperate to
leave the cemetery. I see bones here, bones there, bones scattered on the blanket of snow. Yet as fast as I spot them they disappear again.
I rush out into the street. Suddenly I am surrounded
by people going about their business; traffic making its way along the busy road.
It’s noisy, bustling, normal.
What happened I will never know nor understand. But happen
it did. And it terrified me.
Picture: Cloak by Keith's Ramblings
Marvelous story to tell around a campfire (at least I hope it was a story).
ReplyDeleteGood grief yes! I got scared writing it!
DeleteWhat a Halloween story...he was walking too long on that day, I guess, this is why it happened...also, what is normal in nowadays, how you said, noisy, bustling...and this silence.....at graveyard.....like the contrast.
ReplyDeleteHe won't be going that way again that's for sure!
DeleteI bet you scared yourself! BOO!
DeleteThis fantastic and so vivid I felt I was the one experiencing it! I was holding my breath!
ReplyDeletemindlovemisery aka Yves
Wow thank you Amber! Hope I didn't scare you!
DeleteThis was a great take on this prompt Keith. You created excellent tension and took us on the journey with you leaving us like you grappling with the conundrum of what you saw. Thanks so much for partaking in this challenge. Michael
ReplyDeleteIt was a thoroughly enjoyable write Michael. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteOh, VERY eerie ... wow....
ReplyDeleteI take short cuts through cemeteries, but no more! Your story ensures I will take the long way round.
ReplyDeleteFantastic tale.
Wow .. what a great ghost tale ... loved it! Bastet
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