I feel like the gates of hell have opened and I'm on fire... Your page is spooky!!! Your story is spooky and all I want is to crawl upon the lap of momma and whine LOL.. Great stuff Keith.
I had a ton of disruptions here (visitors much like Halloween kids coming and going) so it took hours to read but I enjoyed your story.
Oh, I should have read this in daylight - excellent as always!!!
OH! A totally delighful and truly spooky Halloween tale, I loved every word of it! Great job Keith!!
I suppose the lesson is we mustn't make fun of other worldly beings. Luckily it worked out right in the end except for his lingering doubts.
Brr..shivers down the old writing spine..being lily livered I'd say don't answer and if pressed keep the chain on..Jae ;)
LOL..... Shiver me timbers.... That was perfectly... Goolish!Very spooky indeed :)