Wednesday, April 02, 2008

poem2 - sobbing

'
sitting
quietly
in a corner
sobbing

tears
flowing
down her cheeks
alone

mind
searching
for a reason
confused

wondering
why
did he leave
suddenly

joy
happiness
now all gone
memories

crying
trembling
curled in a ball
inconsolable

others
ignore
it’s like she’s
invisible


spoken 'sobbing'




5 comments:

  1. Ah.
    I have been there more than once.
    You have captured it.

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  2. really like the form.. compliments your poem so well... even better to hear it spoken.. well done day 2....

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  3. That was very sad but so well expressed.

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  4. oh yes, superb job on day two, you are on a roll, this sobbing piece speaks volumes

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  5. Again, most excellent! Your talent leaves me in awe.

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