For Sunday Photo Fiction where we have a picture of Doctor Who's Tardis!
Knock knock”
“Who’s there?”
“Disguise”
“Disguise who?”
Disguise in love with you!”
John got home from work later than Lea and they always did a knock-knock joke before she'd open the door and let him in.
“Knock knock”
“Who’s there and why that funny voice?" Lea giggled. "John?"
“Knock knock”
“John, you are scaring me”
Lea edged open the door a little. A man in a black hoody pushed his way in and slammed his fist on the light switch plunging the flat into darkness.
"Hello Lea"
He switched on a torch and held it beneath his chin.
“I said I’d find you, Lea".
“What the hell do you want Mike?”
“Stupid question Lea. I want what's is mine. I’m taking you home”
“Knock knock” Nothing. “Knock knock” Louder.
“Lea, open the door sweetheart” Still nothing.
John used his key to let himself in. Lea was nowhere to be seen.
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Menacing moods!
ReplyDeleteIndeed. Thanks Reena
DeleteOooh that is so creepy. Good story Keith
ReplyDeleteDelighted to have scared you! Cheers.
DeleteIf you have a past, don't open the door until you know for sure. Very scary.
ReplyDeleteVery wise! Thanks mimi.
DeleteYikes!
ReplyDeleteThat's what he said! Cheers Darla
DeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant ! Loved your story .
I'm pleased. Thanks moon.
DeleteHi Keith - well that'll teach everyone not to play games in getting the door opened. And it's not even Halloween ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteThey should have had one of those chain thingamajigs! Cheers Hilary
Deleteand I thought the hoody figure would be John playing prank on Lea. unexpected.
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So she hoped but it was not to be. Thanks Kalpana
DeleteOh no that was quite an scary story. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteReally pleased you enjoyed it Marja
DeleteVery eerie. I like it.
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking the time to comment.
DeleteOMG, I need the next part. What happened then?
ReplyDelete...not telling! Cheers
DeleteI live alone and never answer the door to anyone I do not know. OTOH, if a TARDIS is out front, all bets are off. (though with a new female doctor maybe not)
ReplyDeleteThose little spy glass things in the door are a good idea for us loners!
DeleteYipes! That's terrifying.
ReplyDeleteSorry about that!
DeleteWell THAT was a little different! (I want a Tardis!)
ReplyDeleteI always try to take a less obvious route if I can find one! Cheers Calen
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