For Sunday Photo Fiction where we have a picture of Doctor Who's Tardis!
Disguise in love with you!”
John got home from work later than Lea and they always did a knock-knock joke before she'd open the door and let him in.
“Who’s there and why that funny voice?" Lea giggled. "John?"
“John, you are scaring me”
Lea edged open the door a little. A man in a black hoody pushed his way in and slammed his fist on the light switch plunging the flat into darkness.
He switched on a torch and held it beneath his chin.
“I said I’d find you, Lea".
“What the hell do you want Mike?”
“Stupid question Lea. I want what's is mine. I’m taking you home”
“Knock knock” Nothing. “Knock knock” Louder.
“Lea, open the door sweetheart” Still nothing.
John used his key to let himself in. Lea was nowhere to be seen.
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Indeed. Thanks ReenaDelete
Oooh that is so creepy. Good story KeithReplyDelete
Delighted to have scared you! Cheers.Delete
If you have a past, don't open the door until you know for sure. Very scary.ReplyDelete
Very wise! Thanks mimi.Delete
That's what he said! Cheers DarlaDelete
Brilliant ! Loved your story .
I'm pleased. Thanks moon.Delete
Hi Keith - well that'll teach everyone not to play games in getting the door opened. And it's not even Halloween ... cheers HilaryReplyDelete
They should have had one of those chain thingamajigs! Cheers HilaryDelete
and I thought the hoody figure would be John playing prank on Lea. unexpected.ReplyDelete
So she hoped but it was not to be. Thanks KalpanaDelete
Oh no that was quite an scary story. Loved it.ReplyDelete
Really pleased you enjoyed it MarjaDelete
Very eerie. I like it.ReplyDelete
Thanks for taking the time to comment.Delete
OMG, I need the next part. What happened then?ReplyDelete
...not telling! CheersDelete
I live alone and never answer the door to anyone I do not know. OTOH, if a TARDIS is out front, all bets are off. (though with a new female doctor maybe not)ReplyDelete
Those little spy glass things in the door are a good idea for us loners!Delete
Yipes! That's terrifying.ReplyDelete
Sorry about that!Delete
Well THAT was a little different! (I want a Tardis!)ReplyDelete
I always try to take a less obvious route if I can find one! Cheers CalenDelete