Post1465. Tuesday February 28
Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
It was Harvest Festival day and Maisy had just finished gathering some crops to take to the service when her brother Tom staggered up to her, bottle in hand. She told him to go away, but he instead he barged into her sending her flying. Her tractor and one of her cows fell on the floor and her handful of freshly harvested cress got caught in the breeze from the open door and blew all over the kitchen.
Fortunately, their mother appeared and after gathering up what she could with one hand, whilst holding a wriggling Tom with the other, calm was restored.
An hour later Maisy proudly added her contribution to the display of fruit and vegetables in the school hall and sang ‘we plough the fields and scatter’ at the top of her voice!
She gave up farming the next day. Her tractor and cows now rattle around at the bottom of her toy box.
Maisy is a nurse…...
In many ways nursing and farming share the same risks and worries... what will live, what will recover, what will thrive, and what will die. My father was a farm implements dealer, both my parents grew up as farm kids, I think, given the choice I'd rather do that than be a nurse as my daughter is, in that job you literally hold life and death in your hands.
ReplyDeleteI grew up in a small farming comunity and it certainly shaped my life. Thanks Josie
DeleteThis was wonderful! I had to read it three times as, at first I thought they were adults and her brother was a drunk...not a toddler!!
ReplyDeleteExcellent play on words!!
- Lisa
Haha! Glad you liked it Lisa
DeleteHahaha! Maisy is a child pretending to be a farmer so next she tried being a nurse. SO CUTE!!
ReplyDeleteKids do get bored quite quickly! Thanks PJ
DeleteHi Keith - does Maisy now drop the tray of instruments? Great story telling though ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteShe probably does Hilary!
DeleteI loved reading this piece! Thank you for sharing. :D
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure Sailaja
DeleteLovely lightness of touch Keith, very enjoyable. Who knows what the farming world has lost with Maisie's premature exit into nursing!
ReplyDeleteFarmings loss is nursing's gain - until she gets bored with that too! Cheers Iain
DeleteYou portray people so well, in all walks of life - and beyond. Amazing.
ReplyDeletePeople come in so many varieties! Fun to search them out. Thanks as ever Darla
DeleteHi, I’m majesticgoldenrose, and I am glad you used my prompt. Great post, btw! You write so well!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the photo Kate
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