Saturday, February 11, 2017

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Post 1447. Saturday February 11

The Sunday Whirl and Sunday’s Whirligig.



It was Friday night at The Crossroad Inn. I sat on a bar stool,  my foot tapping to the pounding beat. My beer quivered, battered by the ferocious volume. The melody dived and soared, twisted and tumbled. The unrelenting rhythm resounded from the rafters. Nothing unusual there!

It was Saturday morning outside The Crossroad Inn. A croaky voice sang a song. There, leaning against the wall was a frail fellow, wrapped in ragged burlap and struggling to remain upright. His grained face was half hidden by a tangle of unkempt grey hair. He plucked a battered ukelele. It only had one string. There were a few coins in a tin at his feet but hardly enough to feed him. ‘No home’ said the words on the torn scrap of cardboard.

It was Sunday morning at the Holy Cross church. I sat with the sparse congregation, bathed in the holiness of the sacred building. A statue stared down at me, its hands stretched toward me offering succour; forgiveness. I took bread and drank wine. I felt blessed.

It was Monday morning and as I buttered my toast my thoughts returned to that frail fellow. It was wrong. Everything that weekend suddenly seemed wrong. I'd reached a crossroad and I knew I should head in a new direction. Can one person put things right?  Maybe not but I’m going to have a jolly good try!




The given words at The Sunday Whirl are song, rhythms, melody, unusual, face, half, rag, upright, stool, root and resound.

At Sunday's Whirligig we have burlap, butter, bread, gutted, grey, grained, feed, ferocity, forgiven, holiness, home and hidden.

I used twenty-two of the twenty-four provided. 


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12 comments:

  1. Excellent story, I like the way you've set it up as a timeline. YES, one person can make all the difference to another person and maybe more! Caring is contagious!

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  2. Hi Keith - exactly one person can make a difference and that spreads out ... a smile and a helping hand to start the world around us to improve. Cheers Hilary

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    1. You have to stert somewhere! Cheers Hilary.

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  3. I can't help but wonder what putting things right means in this context.

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    1. Everything! Thanks for dropping by MMT

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  4. One person "putting things right" may be the beginning of change in the giver and the receiver. A great message!

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  5. The beer quivering because of the ferocious volume is a MOST excellent touch! What a brilliantly creative detail :-)

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  6. One person cannot put things right but they can make a difference and one step back to normality is a start
    which with encouragement could be more.

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  7. Can one person put things right?
    Maybe not but I’m going to have a jolly good try!

    One certainly an do something for it all needs just a start to set the ball rolling!

    Hank

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