Post 1447. Friday February 10
Six Sentence Stories
knock up a sandwich for his own lunch. He tried making toast the other day; he dropped it on
the floor and it landed butter side down. That should have told him something but it didn’t.
It was hardly surprising that she was led into temptation. She walked out this morning, determined to claim the slice of life that was rightfully hers, wondering if he would even bother to sweep up the crumbs of their stale relationship.
For Six Sentence Stories where our given word is Bread
For Six Sentence Stories where our given word is Bread
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Love how you worked the bread theme through this.
ReplyDeleteI hope he didn't become a 'crusty'old man.
ReplyDelete(sorry...couldn't resist ;)
- Lisa
As an experienced, (dare we say crusty), Six Sentence Story participant, allow me to say... this story, with it's wry humor, surely takes the cake.
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Nicely done anyway you slice it! Excellence use of the cue.
ReplyDeleteWonderful weaving of the cue word into a theme that left him with egg on his face along with the bread crumbs on the floor. Well done, my friend. Another fun read! :-)
ReplyDeleteAnd the winner of consistent use of a cue goes to.... Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteThis rings a little too true. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThere needed to be a bit of leavening for that marriage.
ReplyDeleteHi Keith - sounds like she needs to brush him outside to other birds to have a peck at! Great writing though ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteI'm adding my praise to all the others'. I love the woven, recurrent theme.
ReplyDeleteA yeasty story indeed - well kneaded together
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