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As I wandered along the deserted street I had nothing but my shadow for company. The only sound to break the silence was that of my laboured footsteps. I felt alone in the world as though no-one else existed. Until that is I came upon an apartment block, its windows aglow with light. For as I passed the first, I heard the outpouring of jolly laughter and the pop of a cork. I felt a pang of envy for the merriment within. From the second window came the sweet sound of a violin. I paused to take in the melody that floated down and swirled around, wrapping me in a comforting blanket of mellow music. I had a smile on my face as I approached the third. Wondering what I would hear I stopped hoping for something to further raise my spirits. Instead
, I heard a spine-chilling
scream and frantic shouting. In the open window, I noticed somebody turn and stare in my direction. There was a sudden explosion of gunfire. Then everything fell silent.
The End
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This was bone chilling. Did he get shot?
ReplyDeleteRest in peace!Thanks Dee Dee
DeleteNot the ending I was expecting! Great writing Keith
ReplyDeleteNor me when I started writing! Thanks Iain
DeleteThe end was totally unexpected. Absolutely brilliant writing Keith.
ReplyDeletePleased you liked it neel
DeleteHi Keith - certainly spine chilling ... a real horror tale. Very appropriate for the photo ... congratulations - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteI'm pleased it had the desired effect! Thanks Hilary
DeleteI imagine your character still in shadow, witness to a murder!
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Fiction often mimics real life. I can see the headline news now!
Thanks for visiting me at my WP offerings including the fictional 'The Price of Liberty'. I have this account because it is easier for me to comment - Happy New Year. ~Jules
Real life is the breeding ground of believable fiction. Thanks Jules and a happy new year to you also.
DeleteWow, that one ended with a bang!! Well done, you left us totally unprepared for that finale!
ReplyDeleteEven I jumped! cheers Josie
DeleteWow, that was chilling. I like the sudden reversal from the beginning. I like the "textures" you wrote in the descriptions. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your kind words
DeleteGreat story. I love how they write themselves and then stun you with the ending, stunning us, the reader as well.
ReplyDeleteI can relate to having a story take an unexpected turn on you, the author. Well done!
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