Posted Saturday April 9
Today’s neglected words are somewhat easier to pronounce than yesterday's
Holm n. River island
Holm n. River island
Holt n. Woody hill or grove
Herbose adj. Abounding with herbs
A couple of words I liked but couldn't use:-
Huggermugger n. One who acts in a secretive manner. Origin: 1530s
Hornswoggle v- To deceive.
A couple of words I liked but couldn't use:-
Huggermugger n. One who acts in a secretive manner. Origin: 1530s
Hornswoggle v- To deceive.
A fast flowing river ran past our village. About a mile downstream was a little holm. It was our holm, our special place. Often we would hold hands, leap into the water and battle with the current as we swam over to it.
Verity made us a flag. We planted it near the top of a holt and claimed the island for ourselves. On balmy summer afternoons, we would lay on our backs hand in hand in a sweet smelling herbose clearing, and hear nothing but our breath and the songs of birds.
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I didn’t want to do it that day. The river was a rushing torrent. I allowed her to persuade me. Come on she said. The last thing she ever said.
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It was years before I returned. The flag was still there so I surrounded it with a heart of stones. My eye was caught by something hanging in a tree, blowing in the breeze. A shirt. Verity's shirt. I plucked it from the branch and pressed it to my face. It smelled of herbs, the herbs on which we used to lay.
I have not been back again.
As we get a day off tomorrow, I have written a piece for The Sunday Whirl which I will post here at midnight tonight.
As we get a day off tomorrow, I have written a piece for The Sunday Whirl which I will post here at midnight tonight.
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Wow! That was unexpected and extremely well written. I love your use of unfamiliar words and look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words Drusilla
DeleteVery nice cadence/flow! I like this little story. Good emotional bite.
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Thanks so much Patrick
DeleteEvocative and lovely. You used the words well. I have a character named Verity in one of my unfinished novels.
ReplyDeleteBoldly Going Through the Alphabet!
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It's a name I don't hear very often, but I had to go to the surgery the other day and the nurse that poked a needle in my arm was called Verity and the name stuck. The injection hurt but that's not why I killed Verity off!
DeleteSuch a sad one today; even with the unusual words.
ReplyDeletebetty
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DeleteHello from A to Z, Keith. That was a nicely written piece of flash fiction. I felt both suspense and sadness while reading about what happened.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Cynthia
Deleteimpressed by your subtle way of telling a thing, i think i need to learn this from you
ReplyDeletePraise indeed from I writer whose work I really admire!
DeleteThis was touching....It's written so wonderfully I could imagine things happening ....
ReplyDeleteThoughts...Sushree
Thanks so much Sushree
DeleteSo sad. But lovely writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you Miriam
DeleteNice little share, thank you for Having us over...
ReplyDeleteVery Nice Post... but you know that, that's why you posted it! Right!
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I was hoping people would like it but you can never be sure, can you? I'm on my way to your links right now.
DeleteOh dear. This reminds me of Bridge to Terabithia--so sad. I'd like to hang out on a holm.
ReplyDeleteMe too, Thanks Tamara
Deleteyou write such compelling stories....
ReplyDeletePraise indeed! You say the nicest things Kathe
DeleteHi Keith - now I wish I was doing the A-Z .. still it's not to be - next year ...
ReplyDeleteI'm going to look and see if you've done Crowlink ... and Toft - to come ... and there was another phrase or word that we thought about ... it was a freezing visit to see how the Chalk cliffs at Birling Gap were disintegrating .. rather a lot ...
Great story ... I can visualise that ... and Verity - a good name .. cheers Hilary
Hi Hilary. It is so sad to watch the white cliffs at Birling Gap drop to the shore. I've often wondered how Crowlink got it's name do you know? Looking forward to you playing along next year.
DeletePS: Verity is the name of the nurse at Old Town Surgery who tortured me last week. I say no more!
DeleteOh, I was so enjoying the bucolic setting. How sadly beautiful. Well done.
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Best wishes!
I find beauty in sadness. Is that wrong? Thanks once again Darla
DeleteOh! This one is a poignant one! Great piece of writing, Keith!
ReplyDeleteThis is my favourite type of story and the kind I find most satisfying to write. Quite what that says about me I'm not sure!
DeleteI had a feeling that one wasn't going to end happy.
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A sad ending is far more satisfying - provided it's fiction of course!
DeleteGreat story, Keith. Shame you could't include huggermugger, but there you go.
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Great word, isn't it! Thanks Susan
DeleteGreat!
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I am really glad I did! Thanks for dropping by Caz
DeleteLove the theme. You might like the flash fiction site, Mash Stories (http://www.mashstories.com). They use random words as a writing prompt. You did so well with this story, I thought you might like to check it out. Nice job. @sheilamgood at Cow Pasture Chronicles
ReplyDeleteThanks for that Sheila. I'll take a look
DeleteThat was a sad story but a good one. I live close to place called Holt which as it happens is on a hill and there is also lots of forest. Learned something tonight :-)
ReplyDeleteI grew up in a street called The Holt and I always wondered where the name came from. I've now found out! Thanks Bee
DeleteWhat a sad (but good) little story!
ReplyDeleteThank you once again Sarah
DeleteWhat in intriguing little story. On a related note, I'm fairly certain my grandmother used to use the word hornswoggle. I think she is the only live human being I can remember to ever use it. Have a good one!
ReplyDeleteThat's interesting. I think it's a lovely word and I fully intend using it whenever I can
DeleteRomantic tragedy, so very well done. If left us a bit broken-hearted too!
ReplyDeleteJosie
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Sorry about that Josie!
DeleteWhat a beautiful piece, I didn't see the ending coming at all. I love the way you are incorporating weird and wonderful words into the stories
ReplyDeleteDebbie
I'm glad you like it. Thanks so much for dropping by RM.
DeleteIt is good to relate back to old times with nostalgic tales. Fascinated with the rarely used words. Thanks for sharing Keith
ReplyDeleteHank
I'm enjoying searching them out Hank. Thanks so much.
DeleteRather sad piece, well crafted. Like the way you are using archaic words, makes the nostalgia hit even better. Herbose is a good rhyme for verbose :)
ReplyDeleteNilanjana
Madly-in-Verse
Thanks Nilanjana
DeleteSuch a beautifully told story, Keith. The ending is endearing and heartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteMany Blessings,
Lori
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Thank you for your generous words Ravyne. I'll be visiting your posts very soon.
DeleteVery Nice as usual :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Aneesh
DeleteLots of huggermuggers lurking on the blogosphere, never commenting, always lurking... As for your story - hornswoggle!
ReplyDeleteOkay, I just had to try the weird words ;-)
So true and well done!
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