Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Never again!

Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers

oooooowooooo – my, this ships rolling.

 I just missed my mouth with a fork full of food and nearly stuck it  in my eye.

ooooooo – wooooo – here we go again.

Oh ****, that’s my glass of wine gone.

oooooo –wooooo – I’m feeling a little queeeeezeeee...

Run for the railing. Quick.

Three steps forward, two steps back, one step forward.....splat!

Too late. Sorry ladies. How embarrassing.

oooooo – wooooo -  never again.

Never aaaaaagaaaain!



  1. aww, I can see myself, as I suffer from seasickness when I'm on a boat...never again!

  2. Hahahaha! This is hilarious! I love the twist you took to the prompt. Brilliant! I am afraid I would be the one in this story if I were on a ship. Great story Keith and thank you for your participation!

  3. Another good one! I never know what to expect. Well done.

  4. Wine + seasickness = afcds yt Bibb cghffvjydg... Craziness. I really enjoyed this deep, no-holds-barred POV. Your pieces never cease to be entertaining and unique. Love that!

  5. Beautiful flow of thoughts. Reading it really makes me smile :)

  6. Good description of a rocky boat. Reminds me a little of my whale watching adventure. :)

  7. I feel seasick just looking at a boat, great writing.

  8. I'm spinning now. Wine glasses on boats should have lids!

  9. I don't know if I want to laugh or cry?! Well done, Keith.

  10. Haha. Very funny story. Not funny for your main character though. Great job!