Sunday, May 16, 2010

I gave you the key

I try not to repeat my posts too often, but this weeks prompt from Writers Island, the key, tempted me to break my rule! So here goes!








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12 comments:

  1. What a wonderfully powerful piece of poetry. Bravo

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  2. Excellent Keith I love the ending
    "not the lock on my soul" very clever

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  3. We can open our hearts, but the soul takes a special combination to unlock.

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  4. Short, sweet and to the point. Bravo.

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  5. that is a profound piece!

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  6. That last line packs the punch!

    Nice.

    ps We miss Carry On Tuesday

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  7. I love the way you take the cliché of the key to your heart and turn it upside down to the lock on your soul. I like concise poems like this very much.

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  8. Concise and powerful - well done!

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