What a wonderfully powerful piece of poetry. Bravo
Excellent Keith I love the ending"not the lock on my soul" very clever
We can open our hearts, but the soul takes a special combination to unlock.
Short, sweet and to the point. Bravo.http://lindagoin.com/
that is a profound piece!
Darn straight, Keith!!
an oldie but a goodie.
That last line packs the punch!Nice.ps We miss Carry On Tuesday
I love the way you take the cliché of the key to your heart and turn it upside down to the lock on your soul. I like concise poems like this very much.
loved this Keith! xo
Concise and powerful - well done!
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