I like the poem very much.I'm sorry you are going to miss your friend Rosey but I'm sure she will stay in touch and come back again. Brave girl!
I love these two little verses! Serious underlying decleration of independence wrapped in humour.
Brilliant. To the point, well written and passionate, what more could you want :)
What a wonderful take on the prompt! This is a delightful to-the-point poem.
I really like this. The key to the soul, nicely put.
What a terrific poem! It says so much in so few words! And it's a truth we should all notice!
Keith a very poignant piece of writing. As long as you hold the key to your soul the all is not loss.Nicely said.
Great little poem Keith!!And a good reminder to all the heartbroken out there.Nicely done!and what happened to Rosey??I've been MIA from blogging.
Very powerful Not the lock on my soul Your soul will roam free
And you can't beat me eh! Good for you Keith. You showed em. I always find something good from you in your sunday scribblings posts.
Oh opps, that last comment was from me, why am I anonymous?
I like this. Touching verse.I hold myself in the doorway
your on your way back old friend I can feel your spirit growing
this is wonderful Keith!
Excellent! That sounds quite hopeful.
I had shivers! well done!
Well done Kieth!
Bang on!Loved how it ends...Not the lock on my soul....for sure!
Short, simple, and to the point yet so eloquently written! BRAVO!
Very fine poem that captures the essence of a relationship that goes step by step, heart to soul, if all goes well.
Simple. Lovely. Elegant.
WOW...the perfect come back! Great.b