Friday, September 04, 2009

The key

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This weeks prompt on Sunday Scribblings is 'Key'.



23 comments:

  1. I like the poem very much.
    I'm sorry you are going to miss your friend Rosey but I'm sure she will stay in touch and come back again. Brave girl!

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  2. I love these two little verses! Serious underlying decleration of independence wrapped in humour.

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  3. Brilliant. To the point, well written and passionate, what more could you want :)

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  4. What a wonderful take on the prompt! This is a delightful to-the-point poem.

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  5. I really like this. The key to the soul, nicely put.

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  6. What a terrific poem! It says so much in so few words! And it's a truth we should all notice!

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  7. Keith a very poignant piece of writing. As long as you hold the key to your soul the all is not loss.

    Nicely said.

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  8. Great little poem Keith!!
    And a good reminder to all the heartbroken out there.
    Nicely done!
    and what happened to Rosey??
    I've been MIA from blogging.

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  9. Very powerful Not the lock on my soul Your soul will roam free

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  10. And you can't beat me eh! Good for you Keith. You showed em. I always find something good from you in your sunday scribblings posts.

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  11. Oh opps, that last comment was from me, why am I anonymous?

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  12. your on your way back old friend I can feel your spirit growing

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  13. Excellent! That sounds quite hopeful.

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  14. Bang on!

    Loved how it ends...Not the lock on my soul....for sure!

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  15. Short, simple, and to the point yet so eloquently written! BRAVO!

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  16. Very fine poem that captures the essence of a relationship that goes step by step, heart to soul, if all goes well.

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  17. WOW...the perfect come back! Great.

    b

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