Tuesday, September 30, 2008

whisper - a poem

let me read it to you

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You whispered something in my ear

so softly I could hardly hear



You stroked my face as you passed by

as soft as silk your touch, but I



could not see you as you danced through


the trees and leaves, elusive breeze


























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9 comments:

  1. bee u ti fullllllll.

    very gentle this tickled my hair as my eyes drank it in

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  2. This is beautiful. Oh to whisper as softly as a breeze!

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  3. Loved it Keith!
    You have expressed it so beautifully.

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  4. Your poem is the picture of romance without being romantic. Very nice and the picture part of Swirl is a nice touch also.

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  5. Very pleasant experience. thank you...

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