Wednesday, September 10, 2008

goodbye - a poem

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let me read it to you
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Don’t speak
Words will only steal the moment
Your breath
the beating of your heart
says more than words could say

Be still
as my eyes feast on your beauty
Your satin skin
tinted by the sinking sun
is how I will remember you

Watch not
as I melt into the night
All I ask
is for a place in your heart
as you will have in mine


13 comments:

  1. Such a beauty You are a romantic soul Keith

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  2. what a beautiful goodbye...

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  3. beautiful words,, made only that much more hypnotic by the way you read it!!

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  4. And they say romance is dead.

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  5. Pass me another beer will ya. I need ta cry into it!

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  6. Pardon me, I'll come back tomorrow when I've finished sobbing into my keyboard.

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  7. wonderful! I wish there was no goodbye...

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  8. So simply delicious and wonderfully romantic.

    To be a piece of someone's heart would be wonderful.

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  9. sigh...how beautifully said...

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  10. Ah I wish I had written this.. I just know a person whom I would love to give.. sadly he would never know :)

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  11. Very well written and romantic!

    the beating of your heart
    says more than words could say

    Loved it! Thanks for sharing.

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  12. Very lovely. Silence is a wonderful way to love.

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