Friday, April 04, 2008

rivals

.

I want it


So do I


It’s mine


No it’s not


I’ll take it


No you won’t


Don’t you dare


Just watch


Let go


No way


So she bopped him on the nose and ran off with it.

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17 comments:

  1. haha! Very cute! brings back the earlier days raising 3 boys.. How did I survive that Keith? ♥

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  2. Hey, I didn't know you were at my house today!

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  3. Don't ya just love it when it all comes together so nicely and everyone can relate to it in one way or another.

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  4. You hit right on the point :-)

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  5. and I, for one, am glad she got it!

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  6. Cute! That piece of cake is very distracting though LOL. Makes me want to stop reading and go get dessert!

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  7. Well by gosh atleast she knew how to get it. Good for her bop him in the nose and leave. LOL

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  8. Love the ping pong pace of this!

    And all solved by a bop on the nose!

    If only life could always be so simple!

    Gemma

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  9. Keith,

    This is a kind of read that leaves the reader a smile in the face and flashbacks ~ for who among us never did this when we were kids?

    I wish you well.

    ~ Jeques

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  10. HA! Sounds like my second graders on the playground!

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  11. The gender war really catches them that young does it ?!


    Very cute little poem ...
    And I agree with the solution to the
    predicament !! :P

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  12. Laughing! A bop on the nose. Great ending....

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  13. ..your cursor is always a delight... what a good laugh... life is often as simple as that...

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  14. ah rivalry couldnt have been defined better - you do well. Keith, you are still the most popular bloke in the blogosphere, so stop cribbing :) and let's see twenty one more of that genius poetry....i am about to give up, i feel like i have taken over a mountain on top of the giant i am already carrying!

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