Post 1585. Tuesday August 22
Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
As I stood gazing at the big house beyond the fence, a man sidled up to me.
'Magnificent isn't it'
'Sorry?' I said.
'Magnificent; the house. It's deserted now you know'
'Is it?' I said.
'Yes,' he replied. 'In any room, the Master could tug a chain and a bell rang in the kitchen. The butler went to the room and received his instructions. Parsons was his name. Parsons'
'Was it' I said as I started walking away. He followed me.
'There was a cook in the kitchen. Mrs Jones. She prepared the Master’s food and Parsons took it to his room'
'Really' I replied pretending to seem interested.
'The Master of the house was Lord Harrington' he continued. 'Lord Harrington died of food poisoning. Deliberate the police said. Mrs Jones was blamed and went to prison'
'And Parsons?' I asked.
'He disappeared' he muttered as he walked away.
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Great story I get a hunch that I know where Parsons is
ReplyDeleteThat would be my guess as well.
DeleteAHA. The butler did it. Or was he the dinner? I sense a theme here, lol.
ReplyDeleteThat's for you to decide Denise!
DeleteWhy do I think Parson's closer than believed? Nice write
ReplyDeleteThanks Shadow!
DeleteAs the food go-between I think Parsons should have attracted a bit more suspicion. Nice story!
ReplyDeleteHe's a sly bugga'! Cheers Nick.
DeleteSeems Parsons is hiding in plain sight! Great story Keith!
ReplyDeleteI couldn't put it better myself! Thanks PJ
DeleteIts the butler.
ReplyDeleteAnd I am Sherlock :P
Nice read
You clearly missed your true vocation! Cheers Mrs D.
DeleteEmpty mansions are their eerie stories. very well written, Keith.
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They are pretty creepy places! Thanks Kalpana
DeleteDropping hints for us is it Keith? Nicely done! :)
ReplyDelete...a few here and there! Really pleased you liked it.
DeleteHe probably had no option but to disappear :)
ReplyDeleteThat was the most sensible thing to do. Cheers Reena
DeleteInteresting tale and a great ending.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much.
DeleteI guess the narrator should probably run. You can never trust a stranger's instincts, after all.
ReplyDeleteGreat story , Keith .
I tend to agree with you moon!
DeleteShadows tell many a tales. interesting story-line.
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Don't they just! Thanks Kalpana
DeleteGreat tale - enjoyed reading this.
ReplyDeleteI'm pleased Thanks so much for yor picture.
DeleteOh, nice. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Darla
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