Saturday, July 29, 2017


Post 1574. Saturday July 29

Sunday's Whirligig

‘To Joy and Jim’. As the girls clumsily clinked their glasses together, two smashed showering them with wine. They fell about laughing. It was Joy’s hen night and twenty friends were dancing, giggling, drinking…and drinking more!  Then someone uninvited appeared. Sally. 

With a flick of her hair and a sweet smile on her ruby lips, she wandered up to Joy. She clutched her hand. 'You didn’t think I’d miss the best night of your life, did you?' she said. 'Is anyone going to get me a drink?' 

Someone reluctantly handed her some wine. 'To Joy and Jim' she said raising her glass. 'I have a special surprise for you Joy, only I left in the car'. She put down her glass and walked out the door.

Headlights flashed. Sally ran towards them and leapt through the car's open door. With a squeal of tyres, they headed off into the distance. 'Here’s to us' she said, pecking him on the cheek. 'To Sally and Jim'.

For Sunday's Whirligig where the given words are joys, best, surprise, hair, think, someone, sweet, deceit, only, alike, laugh, girls, 



  1. Quick change of mind from Jim who just didn't have the guts to tell Joy. No doubt he will get his reward.

  2. Oh well...Joy has been spared a terrible fate...better luck next time for her !

  3. I hope Joy's not put off for life and finds someone better. ~grin~ Happy Writing!