Post 1571. Tuesday July 25
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I was sunbathing on the beach with my girlfriend when Fisherman Fred moored his boat and came ashore carrying a bucket.
‘Look what I found’ he said. I peered in the bucket and saw a baby waist deep in water. Then I noticed the child had a tail!
‘It’s a merbabe’ I exclaimed Where did you find her..him..err…it? (I’m not sure how you determine their gender at that age!)
‘It was flapping around in the shallow water looking lost’ he said. ‘I don’t know whether to take it to the children's home or the aquarium’. I suggested he popped it in his bath until he decides.
It was then I heard a voice in my ear. ‘Wake up sleepy-head’
‘I must have nodded off’ I said to my girlfriend. ‘You won’t believe the ridiculous dream I just had. I dreamt Fisherman Fred found a merbabe!’
‘How exciting’ said my girlfriend, flapping her tail.
Word count 153
For Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers where the photo prompt is by Louise with The Storyteller's Abode
Hahahaha! His girlfriend is a mermaid! Maybe it is her babe! Cute story Keith!
ReplyDeletePerhaps it is! Thanks PJ
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DeleteAh that's a hilarious story when her tail started flapping lol
ReplyDeletePlesed you liked it Marja
DeleteA cute take. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much
DeleteThe flapping of the tale. Cute little story, Keith.
ReplyDeleteThank you neel
DeleteWell done Keith ... lovely and I love that photo ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteCheers Hilary
DeleteAn entertaining story ,Keith. loved it. Imaginary mermaid and merbabe fitted so well in your story.
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Very kkind of you Kalpana
DeleteNice last line, Keith, added a nice chuckle :-)
ReplyDeleteWe all need a chuckle now and again - pleased to have been of sevice!
DeleteLovely story , Keith. :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteThanks moon
DeleteI did not see that coming.
ReplyDeleteSurprise surprise! Thanks Denise
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Super unexpected that ending
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Haha! Nice comment Mrs D!
DeleteLovely story, Keith. They do say, daydreams often come true. So good luck to them :D Varad
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Varad
DeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteThanks Calen
DeleteHaha! A merbabe. Now that's original. Love the unexpected finish. Great one!
ReplyDeleteReally pleased you liked it! Thank you.
DeleteWell done. Nice twist at the end. I enjoy imagining merpeople might be real.
ReplyDeleteOf course they are real! Cheers
DeleteGood one Keith, gave me a laugh this morning.
ReplyDeleteMission accomplished! Thanks Michael
DeleteDelightful!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Darla
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