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Post 1547. Tuesday June 12

Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers



Not everybody sees her. I do, often. Up there, in that window. When I look into her eyes, she gazes into mine. She reads my thoughts, knows my mood, understands me. Sometimes there is a hint of a smile, sometimes a sorrowful demeanour. Often she cheers me, encourages me; helps me. She laughs with me, sheds a tear with me. I think I cheer her too, I hope so.

Who she is, or who she once was I know not. Why some can see her and others not, is a mystery. I don’t imagine her. I don’t. We are soulmates. We need each other.

There she is again. Up there, in that window. Up there. Do you see her?





For Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers where our picture prompt is byThe Magicsticgoldenrose


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18 comments:

  1. Shadow13 Jun 2017, 11:04:00

    Oh wow, my senses are at fully alert...... of course I can't see her, but can you see the lady in the rocking chair at that empty house on the corner?

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  2. Anonymous13 Jun 2017, 14:11:00

    A clever take on this prompt. I am sure most of FF-participants would now be trying to find her in one of the windows.

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  3. Priceless Joy13 Jun 2017, 16:49:00

    Great story Keith! I love how you interjected the mystery of is she really there or not? Nice!!

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  4. Michael13 Jun 2017, 23:45:00

    That's a great take on this image Keith, so well done you had me looking.

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  5. Leaking Ink14 Jun 2017, 17:27:00

    How lovely. I think I see her too.

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    1. Keith's Ramblings15 Jun 2017, 13:53:00

      I was beginning to think it was just me! Cheers Inky.

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  6. Calensariel14 Jun 2017, 23:12:00

    Oh! Simply love this! I often get antsy reading this short flash fiction stuff because so often it seems like there's a good story behind it waiting to be told. :)

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    1. Keith's Ramblings15 Jun 2017, 13:53:00

      The problem is finding it! Thanks so much Calen~

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    2. Calensariel15 Jun 2017, 18:23:00

      Have faith, bro!

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    3. Darla M Sands18 Jun 2017, 13:48:00

      Your shorts are amazingly complete, so take pride. ~grin~ Happy Writing!

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  7. kittysverses15 Jun 2017, 09:57:00

    I'm curious now to see if I can catch a glimpse of her. Well done.
    kittysverses.wordpress.com

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    1. Keith's Ramblings15 Jun 2017, 13:54:00

      This is like standing in the street pointing up, and watching other people do the same! Thanks.

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  8. Anonymous17 Jun 2017, 21:55:00

    Excellent, Keith. I love this. I cannot see her, but I believe that you do.
    Healed
    Annie at ~McGuffy's Reader~

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  9. kalpana solsi19 Jun 2017, 17:40:00

    I couldn't see her at the window but could feel her presence. a very different and mysterious take on the prompt.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/06/the-mansion.html

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