Thursday, November 24, 2016

Friday Fictioneers

Posted Thursday November 24



We always thought Sally had a secret. Something she wished not to share hidden away behind locked doors deep within the recesses of her mind. Was it to do with her teen years? Perhaps, for she always  steered the subject away whenever it came up.

Sally disappeared one day. No warning. Last June it was. Here one day, gone the next.

A couple of days ago a few of us were having a drink together. We were reminiscing about Sally when a young girl wandered in. She looked vaguely  familiar. She walked up to us.

‘I think you might know my mother’ she said.





       
 ...... is hosted by Rochelle, and this week's photo  prompt comes to          us courtesy of CEayr




20 comments:

  1. Hi Keith - yes how strange ... Sally's Secret newly found out ... one wonders .. cheers Hilary

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  2. A lot to think about here. I wonder why Sally disappeared. Perhaps she knew her 'secret' was out there looking for her. Good one.

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  3. We all have secrets we like to keep behind closed doors...perhaps not as big as Sally's! Nice take.

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  4. Dear Keith,

    Yes, Sally had a secret. Nice take on the prompt.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  5. She must have allowed herself to be found. I hope her friends accept her and her daughter.

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  6. That sounds like an interesting encounter.

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  7. The big reveal here. Now I wonder what's behind hiding her child from everyone. Nicely done, Keith.

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  8. Wonder why she was kept secret...the question is..who's your daddy?!

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  9. Wow! This was wonderfully done, I loved the unfolding of the story. You have a true gift for this! An answer to the mystery, yet leaving so many more questions unanswered.

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    1. You say the nicest things Josie! Thank you so much

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  10. Oh... I guess Sally can come back now once her secret's out...

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    1. Yep - there's a drink on the bar waiting for her!

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