Posted Saturday October 15
It is dark. Very dark. I’m walking. I’m not dreaming.
Walking. Along a track.
Look, a distant light. Flickering. It’s
getting closer. But I’m standing still now.
So many people They are all around me. In
black cloaks, carrying flaming torches. Faces hidden beneath hoods. They are mumbling.
Do you hear them? I’m not dreaming. Prayers. Yes, murmuring prayers. They speak
of re-birth and unholy desires.
See there, a fire. A skillet sits atop, steam
swirling, drifting ’tween the branches of a tree. Someone dips bread into it
and offers it up. Thick blood-red liquid drips to the ground.
And here. A bed of sticks. A man's body lies upon
it. I’m not dreaming. I am not. It is naked, it’s white skin pure as
porcelain. But the face is old. Creased. Weary. Blue eyes stare skyward, unblinking. Those eyes. My eyes? I’m not
dreaming. My eyes.
They surround me. Mumbling, murmuring. One by
one pulling back their hoods. My parents, my sisters, my friends. What are you
doing here? I’m not dreaming. Tell me I’m not dreaming. They are throwing the torches onto the pyre...
Soon it will be morning. Yes. Soon this will
be over. But I’m not dreaming. What’s happening. Where is everybody going? Come
back. I feel dizzy. Everything is turning hazy. I'm in pain. I hurt. Where am I?
I'm not dreaming...
I'm not...
I'm not
I...
For Sunday's Whirligig where the given words are - many, track, skyward, porcelain, flawed, birth, desire, ancestral, prayer, morning, bread and skillet
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Powerfully scary story, Keith. You gripped me right up to that terrifying ending!
ReplyDeleteSusan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
I'd better let go then! Cheers Susan
DeleteIn this instance gently going into the light does not sound like fun.. chilling..well..bad word choice - ouch!
ReplyDeleteIt certainly wasn't one of Alice's paper lanterns that's for sure!
DeleteWake up Keith...you are dreaming again! What have you been drinking?
ReplyDeleteYou know me too well OE!
Delete...tell me about it!
ReplyDeleteWhoa! Perfect terror tale for this season, you made it all feel very real... not dreaming!
ReplyDeleteYou gave me chills! Great job. Happy dreaming...
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