Posted Monday April 18
My neglected O words are:-
My neglected O words are:-
Oratory n. A small chapel within a church for private prayer
Opsimath n. One who learns late in life
Orison n. a short prayer
Oblation n. an offering, a sacrifice, anything offered in worship
A bedraggled figure stood in the oratory. He crossed himself; a simple act which he hoped would be his first step on a journey to forgiveness. His weary face bore a blank expression, his heart harboured an ocean of regret, his soul a sea of shame. He dropped to his knees and mumbled an orison.
Why did he do it, what had he hoped to gain? How could he live to an old age harbouring such a secret? An opsimath with a burden of guilt he could no longer conceal deep inside. Would the God he'd so long denied now offer him a chance to redeem himself?
Why did he do it, what had he hoped to gain? How could he live to an old age harbouring such a secret? An opsimath with a burden of guilt he could no longer conceal deep inside. Would the God he'd so long denied now offer him a chance to redeem himself?
A few hours later he was found on the altar steps, life drained from him; his heart and soul an oblation. A shaft of sunlight pierced the gloom and rebounded from the shining cross which hung above his lifeless body. For a moment, a brief moment, its reflection bathed him in a pool of gold. Amen.
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Well, what did he do? I want to know.
ReplyDelete~Ninja Minion Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
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I have no idea Patricia - I'd like to know too!
DeleteVery clever way to put all those interesting O words together.
ReplyDeleteKind of you to say so Tamara
DeleteAt least he knew where he needed to be to ask for forgiveness.
ReplyDeletebetty
His guilt caught up with him. Thanks betty
DeleteOptimum omnipotent offering?
ReplyDeleteAJ at Ouch My Back Hurts
Just look as these big words! It's catching.
DeleteHi Keith - I am definitely an Opsimath - though I'll try not to drape the Oratory floor with my non-obligatory death or woundedness! I'd like to around a while longer to let the brain grow in its knowledge ...
ReplyDeleteSad story ... but very evocative .. cheers Hilary
I'm glad to hear that Hilary. Prost!
Deletebit confused between oratory and oritory,
ReplyDeleteWhoops! A typo. I is in fact an oratory.
DeleteOpsimath is a great word and one I can completely relate to!!!
ReplyDelete@Kathleen01930
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You and me both Kathleen!
DeleteYou amaze me. Truly. How on earth our you finding such beautifully related words? Well done, oh master wordsmith.
ReplyDeleteIt's taking a lot of work Darla - I had no idea how much when I set my theme!
DeleteI bet! Best wishes.
DeleteCleverly woven story, Keith - and I've discovered I'm an opsimath! :)
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You too? Join the club!
DeleteThanks for teaching me what an oratory is. I wanted to know since ages :-)
ReplyDeleteYour prayer is answered! Thanks Bee
DeleteIntensely, hauntingly beautiful. Guilt does consume us, and in the end most seek redemption. It is my prayer that he died spontaneously and did not take his own life as an act of reparation, whereas I don't believe in a God that demands or want this.
ReplyDeleteThis story was one of your best so far this month!
Josie Two Shoes
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I would like tho think so Josie. Thank you so much for your kind comment.
DeleteI'm kind of confused on what happened to him.
ReplyDeleteHe could no longer live with a secret. What the secret was we'll never know now.
DeletePerhaps it was an oratorical on Ovulation and Obstetrics that caused the ordeal.
ReplyDeleteMary
#AtoZChallenge O is for O'Connor
Ha ha! You could be right Mary!
DeleteFantastic post! Obsimath sounds like "obstinate at math" - maybe that's how I'll remember it. Maui Jungalow
ReplyDeleteThat's one subject I'll never grow into Courtney!Thanks so much.
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