Sunday, March 27, 2016

Sunday Photo Fiction



If only I’d had two minutes more I would have caught that bus. I would have made it to the shop before it closed. I'd have bought some delicious wine, a microwave meal and some yummy chocolate, then caught the bus home again. Right now I’d be watching the six-o-clock news.

As it is I’m drinking tepid skimmed milk and eating a tasteless curled up sandwich whilst watching the eight-o-clock news about someone who was running, tripped, fell in front of a bus and ended up in hospital.

Nurse, a bedpan please!








 Sunday Photo Fiction 

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19 comments:

  1. C. E. Ayr27 Mar 2016, 12:46:00

    Very amusing, Keith

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  2. Angie Trafford27 Mar 2016, 14:09:00

    A very amusing read… It leaves me wondering whether you have actually done this?

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  3. Graham Lawrence27 Mar 2016, 14:38:00

    Nicely set up. I like stories like this that make me chuckle ...

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  4. Mandibelle1627 Mar 2016, 22:39:00

    Haha. He's the guy in hospital. Poor him!

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  5. Deepa28 Mar 2016, 09:36:00

    It was a funny read, sad for the guy :P

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    1. Keith's Ramblings28 Mar 2016, 09:58:00

      He should have looked where he was going! Thanks Dee DCee

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  6. Darla M Sands28 Mar 2016, 19:17:00

    Brilliantly imagined! Poor fellow. ~shudders~ I try very hard not to end up hospitalized.

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  7. csknotts29 Mar 2016, 01:35:00

    Funny!

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  8. Unknown30 Mar 2016, 01:10:00

    LOL's :) Sad, but at least there's another chance of the planned meal and hopefully, no buses will be in sight! Well written... :)

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  9. Old Egg31 Mar 2016, 00:29:00

    Any visit to hospital is a good incentive to take better care of yourself.

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  10. Lux G.31 Mar 2016, 06:51:00

    We sometimes take 2 minutes for granted yet when you miss your ride, it's everything.

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  11. Bee Halton31 Mar 2016, 10:29:00

    Oh dear..... :-) nice twist!

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  12. P.S. Joshi2 Apr 2016, 19:08:00

    Funny story, Keith. That was a great twist at the end. :D --- Suzanne

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