I am not too fond of small critters like bugs but I had fun reading your poem, Keith. You made me smile. I enjoyed the rhymes too.
Ha...cute poem !
I could see this as a children's book! Very clever, Keith.
aww...love the fairy tale effect...
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ha. very cute...and written as well so that a kid could really enjoy this....reminds me a bit of Shel Silverstein...i miss him....
Lovely musing on "if." I like the form you used as well with the first two lines rhyming. I take it that this was something you liked to do as a kid--imagining yourself in other rolls. Nice.
That would be one heck of an interesting zoo if it were possible. :) POSH
Hahaha - not bad. But I would not want to live in that kind of zoo :D
Excellent, the wonder and power of seeing life as a child, this captures the impossible
Nice format. When I was a kid,I would have gone to your zoo. Especially if you had grasshoppers. Now, probably not.
I just went to the zoo last week too, and it was like a summer day. As is this weekend too. We are lucky for now.
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