Wednesday, October 22, 2014

My Zoo

My contribution to this week's Poetry Jam!



12 comments:

  1. I am not too fond of small critters like bugs but I had fun reading your poem, Keith. You made me smile. I enjoyed the rhymes too.

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  2. I could see this as a children's book! Very clever, Keith.

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  3. aww...love the fairy tale effect...

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  5. ha. very cute...and written as well so that a kid could really enjoy this....
    reminds me a bit of Shel Silverstein...i miss him....

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  6. Lovely musing on "if." I like the form you used as well with the first two lines rhyming. I take it that this was something you liked to do as a kid--imagining yourself in other rolls. Nice.

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  7. That would be one heck of an interesting zoo if it were possible. :) POSH

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  8. Hahaha - not bad. But I would not want to live in that kind of zoo :D

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  9. Excellent, the wonder and power of seeing life as a child, this captures the impossible

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  10. Nice format. When I was a kid,I would have gone to your zoo. Especially if you had grasshoppers. Now, probably not.

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  11. I just went to the zoo last week too, and it was like a summer day. As is this weekend too. We are lucky for now.

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