Monday, August 27, 2012

Max the explorer!

Written for Sunday Scribblings

Little Max climbed onto a stool and reached for the biscuit tin. He felt inside then took out a chocolate covered wafer and another round one covered in hundreds and thousands. He carefully placed them inside a plastic bag and put them in his pocket ready for the journey.

Max was heading for the jungle.

There were dangerous animals there so he would need a big stick to fend them off. He opened the door of the garden shed and looked around for a something suitable . Some were too long, others to fat. But he found a bamboo cane which was just perfect. He would need a hat too. Up in the corner he saw a green cap with a big peak. That would do. He stood on tiptoes, wobbled a bit, and then just managed to knock it off its hook with his stick. It was a bit big but it was better than nothing.

He remembered hearing something about rain in forests. He would need his boots to keep his feet dry. And in case it was hot he had better take that paper fan that Mummy bought back from Spain last year. And that little torch that lives in the cupboard under the stairs for when the sun goes down.

All he needed now were some fellow travellers. Sophie was a bit too grown up and she always laughed at him when he planned his adventures. But Jack was only five and he would really enjoy himself. So he dragged him away from his Lego train and told him not to tell a soul about the fun to come.

Darius the Dalmatian would enjoy it too. Max went to get his lead and Darius started bouncing round in circles because he was so excited.

He wanted one more traveller. Edward the teddy hadn’t been out the house for ages. He would love to come. They were ready for the trek into the jungle..

Max wasn’t sure which way the jungle was, but it was probably somewhere near the bottom of the garden. There were some trees on the other side of the fence and it always looked dark and mysterious over there. Jack pulled one way, and Darius another, but Max tugged them down the garden path.

Suddenly Daddy called from the window - ‘Off on one of your jaunts again Max?’

‘We are going exploring in the jungle’ Max said.

'I thought we could all go to play on the swings and get an ice cream’ said Daddy.

Suddenly all thoughts of a trip to the jungle were forgotten!


  1. I am almost disappointed that the exploration of the jungle didn't take place especially with such a well chosen team but perhaps next time!

  2. a delightful story about the realities of children....



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