Written for Sunday Scribblings and Carry On Tuesday
It
could so easily have been the shortest story ever told. When he entered the
world it was as if he didn’t like what he saw or sensed or felt. He was a discontented
child who seemed to have resented the efforts of those who had fought to save him as he
struggled to take his first breaths. At school he was a loner who shunned the
efforts of his peers to befriend him. To fill his days he crammed his head with
the information meted out by his teachers. His raison d’ĂȘtre was the pursuit of
knowledge, leaving no time for the banality of social intercourse or interaction with those whom he thought inferior.
At
university he shunned the seemingly obligatory revelry and carousing which went
on outside his gloomy room. There he sat
night after night; pen in hand, scribbling on endless sheets of paper, bathed
in a shallow pool of light from an ancient anglepoise lamp. Ten, twenty, thirty
years later, he still sat a desk every night. Still he wrote, every night. His
days were filled with vain efforts to instil knowledge into the brains and
hearts of disinterested students whose only thoughts were when and where
they would next be squandering their allowances.
One
day he wasn’t there. His students waited on the old oak benches, before the
creaking platform which was that day silent. A visit to his little room found
it to be vacant. There was nothing there. Nothing that is, but an enormous
pile of papers on top of which sat the fountain pen he’d used since a child and a bottle of ink. After
almost sixty years living in a world which seemed alien to him he’d simply
disappeared. He had long since disowned his family and he had no friends, just casual aquaintnesses who were as mystified as every body else about his whereabouts.
No
one could have imagined what the mighty tome contained. It was a story; a long
story about a way of life he’d never experienced. It was a novel, a story of a
life with the highs and lows that all of us experience. It was filled with joy,
yet sometimes tinged with sadness. A story of relationships and adventures, successes
and failures. A story of a life he never experienced yet somehow understood,
tales even of licentiousness and debauchery.
It
ended abruptly; the work was unfinished. Where was the rest of the story?
A
shaft of sunlight fell like a spotlight on his discarded lecturer’s gown which lay crumpled on the
floor in the corner of the dismal room. Sitting atop was a screwed up piece
of paper. On it were written just six words. ‘The best is yet to be’
AWESOME!!! you're a great story teller! :-)
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DeleteUtterly brilliant Keith..observing the story leaves you outside..often..and yet there is hope..that in time we can all leave the dismal room and take part in it..(why else would it be interesting unless deep down 'we' wanted to be out there too!) Jae
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful and eerily sad tale and such a pleasure to read.
ReplyDeleteAnd about time, too! This sucked me in right from the get go!
ReplyDeleteYou made me care about this man in a few, short paragraphs. Oh, how I'd love to read the rest of his story!
ReplyDeleteYou told an excellent tale in a tight space. I was hooked from start to finish. Loved the end.
ReplyDeleteWhew.... thank goodness he realised and started to live his life after all those years of exisiting!
ReplyDeleteOooh! Good one. I got shivers reading that.
ReplyDeleteI'm with Kendall, goose-bump-good, Keith! Loved this!
ReplyDeleteThis tale is brilliant and I'm glad he left the room behind. I hope he finds the best that's yet to be!
ReplyDeleteNow that he has vanished and discarded his empty lifestyle, I hope that he will find all of the tales that he has always known. I find pleasure in knowing that he left the room in such a mystifying way.
ReplyDeleteSuch a complete tale. I love the way that you forced the years(decades)to carry on.
awww this left me grinning...love it. It leaves you wondering about his adventures, certain he is off somewhere making magic in a very real way!
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