It’s a blustery cold and miserable day. I walk along a deserted promenade, as an angry ocean taunts and mocks me.
I raise my head and watch as
thrashing charcoal waves tumble up the beach and then recede leaving in their
wake a foam of nacreous bubbles which too soon disappear beneath the grinding grey
pebbles.
I see a golden glow before me and and as I get closer a tired looking retro cafe
beckons me. I enter. Now I am wrapped in welcome warmth.
The cacophony behind me is replaced by corny pop music screeching from a
tinny transistor on the counter. A bored assistant looks up from his newspaper.
One lone soul sits in a corner, wrapped in a cheerful wool scarf; a welcome contrast to the gloom beyond the steam covered windows.
One lone soul sits in a corner, wrapped in a cheerful wool scarf; a welcome contrast to the gloom beyond the steam covered windows.
As my hands grip a mug of steaming cocoa I slowly sip it whilst my
mind wanders to another place, a place imprinted in my mind. To a golden
palm fringed beach, the smell of nutmeg on the breeze, a brightly painted
wooden snack bar alive with jolly banter and bouncing calypso.
Great response and welcome to the Wordle. You've done a wonderful job painting an atmospheric picture of a place in space and time. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is sort of poetry prose...nice flow and images.I too am a palm tree person:)
ReplyDeleteHope you enjoy your new wordle home !
OOOh, I like what you've done here.
ReplyDeleteI like different and unexpected directions.
I have this account so I don't have to fuss with the incompatible comment do-didittiy thing.
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~Jules
Love the juxtaposition of dreary and joyful.
ReplyDeleteThis is so vivid, the descriptions are stunning and palpable
ReplyDeleteWelcome to MLMM
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