....and off we go!
YOUR NUMBER'S UP
He hadn’t been back to his old place for years. He had left behind
a miserable existence to embark on a new life; life as a single person in which
he could do as he pleased. His decision to depart had not exactly been a
popular one. He walked right away from problems he'd caused, leaving others behind
him to sort out the mess. He had resisted all attempts by those he left to
contact him; to find him, to help them. To them, he had simply disappeared. But
now he was back; back in the room he used to share in happier times. The place was
still actually his, and he’d heard that it had been abandoned. He just wanted
to have a look.
The door creaked as he pushed it open. There was just an empty
space, or so he thought. There was a flapping sound from somewhere in the gloom
and he just made out a bird darting out of a broken window. He clicked the
light switch on off on off. He hadn’t really expected the power to be on. A
shaft of sunlight crossed the room, filled with specks of dancing dust. It settled
on an old tape recorder sitting on the floor. As his eyes became accustomed to
the darkness and shadows, he realised the old machine was the only thing in the
room. Years ago the tapes had played music. Music to dance to, music to sing along to.
They were happier times years before he caused his world to collapsed around
him.
What happened next took his breath away. As he stood staring
at the grimy dusty contraption, the dials suddenly lit up and the spools began
to turn. He was transfixed. He could just make out a voice. It was muffled. He couldn’t
make out the words; not even sure about the language. Then it became a little
clearer. “Hello” an echoing voice shouted. “Hello, hello hello”. Then it
started speaking numbers, slowly at first, and low. The numbers kept repeating
and the voice began to get higher and higher as the numbers came faster and faster.
“Zero six one two two zero one four three - zero six one two two zero one four
three” over and over. The same nine numbers. Over and over. “Hello” it screamed
again. “Hello” And then the numbers stated
again, faster and higher, higher and faster until ….. there was a sizzle,
a flash, a bang and the machine expired in a cloud of smoke. He turned around
and fled.
Back in the street he wandered aimlessly along as he tried
to make sense of what had just transpired. It took his eyes a while to get used
to the sunlight. As he squinted at the stomping crowd which rushed and jostled its way past and around him, he suddenly became aware of people saying hello. He had no idea who they were or why. He had lost track of time; what
was the time? What day was it? He caught site of a display high up on a
building. In bright red digits it displayed the date. Zero six, one two, two
zero one four. Those numbers seemed familiar.Of course, they were the ones he
had heard earlier. The machine had been reciting the date, June 12 2014. But he
had also heard a ninth number, three. He walked the kerb and was about to start
crossing the road when a voice called out “Hello, can you tell me the time?”.
He looked up at the display again just as it changed from the date to the time.
“Yes, it’s three …….”
There was a screech of brakes, screaming all around then - nothing.
Silence. And darkness.
When his eyes opened he was in a different place. A grey place
where smoke floated in the air, the grass smouldered and flames licked the barren trees. Sinister birds like magpies, only red and black whirled in the sky swooping down to taunt him with their shrill screaching. “Hello” a voice said from somewhere; he couldn’t see where. “We were
expecting you”
Marvelously cryptic; well done.
ReplyDeleteBetter keep posting Keith after that date just to make sure the story isn't about you! Excellent tale.
ReplyDeleteOooh, that was great!
ReplyDeleteThat was so eerie, perhaps I shouldn't have read it just before going to bed, lol.
ReplyDeleteSounds like the first chapter of a book you are writing....nicely done.
ReplyDeleteSuperb short story!
ReplyDeleteOh, yes! And three completed the picture! LOL
ReplyDeleteI think you should shake the hand of that muse..fantastically apocalyptic...now..should i turn the radio on..
ReplyDeleteWow! Great story!
ReplyDeleteFantastic how this world continuallly collapses only to reform itself ..... Culminating in the meeting witn Cobb himself !
ReplyDeleteGood one
Stephen King-esque!!! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThoroughly enjoyed...love the inclusion of magpies...
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