Friday Fictioneers. This week Rochelle has offered us a picture by fellow scribe C.E.Ayr
As I was walking down the avenue, the sun smiled at me. Trees bowed as I passed and birds tweeted twello. I waved at a flag and it waved back. A mannequin in a shop window raised his top hat. How polite I thought.
Unfortunately, I tripped on a worm that was dancing a merry jig, and my shoe flew off. I asked a passing gust of wind to pick it up, but it said blow that and kept going. How rude. My shadow offered to get it for me but sadly he slithered down a storm drain.
Do you think I’ll be able to replace him on Black Friday?
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Very fun, whimsical feel to this. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThat's how I'm feelin' right now!
DeleteDelightful. With his bad luck so far, I'm thinking that he'll get no help getting his shadow back.
ReplyDeleteYea, he's a shadow of his former self!
DeleteYou have a wonderful imagination! Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteGee thanks Darla! This time I let it off its reins!
DeleteYour stories always make me laugh. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteJob done! Thanks Jenn
DeleteYou were dancing right into the magical dreamland on a sunbeam. It was great fun to visit with you.
ReplyDeleteMay I have the next dance? It's fun out here!
DeleteYou sure have Mick!
ReplyDeleteSounds like the narrator is a little underweight.. :-)
ReplyDeleteHaha! You could well be right Mr b.
DeleteDear Keith,
ReplyDeleteI could see this as an animated feature. Cute.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Really cute story, Keith. Children would love this. Poor shadow. Well done and creative. :D --- Suzanne
ReplyDeleteSo many mishaps.... Enjoyed! I don't think that Black Friday is going to have her answers.
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