Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
oooooo– wooooo – my, this ships rolling.
oooooo– wooooo – my, this ships rolling.
I just missed my mouth with a fork full of food and nearly stuck it in my eye.
ooooooo – wooooo – here we go again.
Oh ****, that’s my glass of wine gone.
oooooo –wooooo – I’m feeling a little queeeeezeeee...
Run for the railing. Quick.
Three steps forward, two steps back, one step forward.....splat!
Too late. Sorry ladies. How embarrassing.
oooooo – wooooo - never again.
Never aaaaaagaaaain!
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aww, I can see myself, as I suffer from seasickness when I'm on a boat...never again!
ReplyDeleteHahahaha! This is hilarious! I love the twist you took to the prompt. Brilliant! I am afraid I would be the one in this story if I were on a ship. Great story Keith and thank you for your participation!
ReplyDeleteAnother good one! I never know what to expect. Well done.
ReplyDeleteWine + seasickness = afcds yt Bibb cghffvjydg... Craziness. I really enjoyed this deep, no-holds-barred POV. Your pieces never cease to be entertaining and unique. Love that!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful flow of thoughts. Reading it really makes me smile :)
ReplyDeleteGood description of a rocky boat. Reminds me a little of my whale watching adventure. :)
ReplyDeleteI feel seasick just looking at a boat, great writing.
ReplyDeleteI'm spinning now. Wine glasses on boats should have lids!
ReplyDeleteI don't know if I want to laugh or cry?! Well done, Keith.
ReplyDeleteHaha. Very funny story. Not funny for your main character though. Great job!
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