This week our words at The Sunday Whirl are...
Things not said
Every year he went. Every year he sat there beside
his mother’s grave. And every year his guilt grew. For she was taken too soon and
he had done nothing to prevent it. But could he have stopped it? He
knew it would happen, so surely it would have whatever action he took. Yet
still he wondered if he could have pointed the finger of fate in a different
direction. For he was a seer. Since childhood he had kept his gift a secret, if
a gift it was. It now seemed more of a curse. He had told a school friend about
it once, but his friend had told him he was crazy. Even today he could still
hear his mocking laughter. He even mentioned it to his priest, but instead of simply telling him he was imagining things the priest told him that he should forever
keep it a secret for it could do more harm than good. So he never mentioned it
again. Not even to his wife, not to his son. He remained a martyr, a prisoner
in his own mind, knowing about things before they happened but not telling a
soul even when he knew he should. And with every passing year he would steel
his resolve.
Usually the things he knew
about were minor matters within his family. But on one occasion he foresaw
something terrible which was about to happen to a complete stranger in the
street, yet he did nothing. As she passed him he saw something shine as if it
was trying to catch his eye. He knew, but he just stood there as someone
appeared from the shadow of a building and grabbed the stranger and ripped
a diamond ring from her finger.
It was soon after that he had his dreadful premonition about his Mother. Yet he did nothing. He warned nobody.
And as he sat again at her graveside, his mind filled with remorse and
self-reproach.
In the breeze he thought
he heard his name. He looked around. Nothing, nobody. Then a
muffled whispering. Words. He could just make them out. ‘Son’ the distant
voice murmured. ‘I know that you foresaw my fate for I share your
gift. Has it ever occurred to you that you never know not what is
about happen to you? That we share, for I was not aware how I would meet
my end, nor that it would happen when I was so young. Right now I could warn
you of something that will befall you very soon. Should I tell you? Yes, but
like you I’ll keep it hidden within. Make peace with your maker while you can
my son’ With that the voice drifted away.
It happened the next day. Only
one person foresaw the terrible event. His son. But his son had said
nothing.
Excellent story .....
ReplyDeleteWhat a poisoned chalice! My guess is that it was not a gift but a curse as their foresight was unalterable. We can always rely on you to write som fabulous tales Keith.
ReplyDeleteIf your words can't change the future, perhaps it's best to stay silent. What a burden, though!
ReplyDeletevery well told- but what a fate to have that second sight.
ReplyDeleteThat's a heavy weight to carry... Great story, Keith.
ReplyDeleteWell it is close to Halloween…a little bit scary?
ReplyDeleteAn inheritance you would not want to receive that's for sure
ReplyDeleteBrilliant story.. I liked the ending very much.
ReplyDeleteInteresting, that little twist at the end. Enjoyed this story!
ReplyDeleteSome things are better left unsaid , my head hurts ...cheers mate
ReplyDeleteIn a word, fascinating...
ReplyDeletePerfectly chilling for the season...
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