It's The Sunday Whirl time again, so here is a quick Wordle - a puddle of prose in an ocean of verse!
No one knew where she came from. An elderly woman, in a full
length coat and a tattered scarf which partly hid her wrinkled and weather
weary features. She just appeared one day. After that she used to visit regularly and sit by
the cracking log fire, leaning towards the dancing flames with a pint of beer
cradled in her hands. There was always a battered case by her side. Never a
smile, never a word to anyone around her. One day someone, I can’t remember who
right now, said “hello” to her and sat at an adjoining stool holding out his
hands in order to warm them. “Not from round these parts?” he asked “Not seen
you in here before”. She turned slowly towards him and looked him straight in
the eye. She said nothing, but something about that icy gaze sent a shiver down
his spine. After that nobody said anything to her.
One day she muttered a few words, very quietly. Several people
stopped talking and looked in her direction. “I’m sorry” said one. “Were you
saying something?” She shifted in her chair and stared towards him. “He’s here”
she said. “Here in your cosy little village” and with that she spat on the
floor. Three or four gathered around her. She pointed a bony finger in the
direction of Donald. Her hand shook. “You never knew” she said. Donald said nothing, but
sat down next to her, a worried look on his face
.
“Nobody knew” she continued. “They didn't believe me. They said
there wasn't a grain of truth in what I told them. One day I reached my limit. There was no other way; I had to escape. I packed case, this case, and crept out in the middle of
the night” Donald placed a hand over his open mouth and whispered something. “I
walked out of the door, through the gate and down the lane along the east side of
Marlow Copse” she said. “Then I heard a sound; a panting sound; a sound I knew only
too well. I started running. I could still hear him panting, closer and closer.
I rounded Badger Bend and where the lane parts, there he was; facing me. I don’t
know where I found the strength from; perhaps it’s what you holy lot call divine
intervention, but for the first time in my life I got the better of him”. Sweat
started running down Donald’s face; a look of horror filled his eyes. “Our
father is still in the village Donald and so am I” she croaked. “You thought we’d left
together didn't you Donald. You believed what you wanted to believe. You and
the rest of our so-called family thought I’d lied all along” she said. She
stared straight at him. “Didn't you Donald!” she screamed. “Didn't you!” She
flung her glass on the floor, the fire hissed as the beer splashed into the
flames. “They never looked in the deep water in Durling Lake Donald, did they?
Well, that’s where our precious father is now brother dear. At least, what’s left of after the fish had
their fill” She let out a chilling laugh.
With that she grabbed her case and swept passed the stunned
onlookers and on her way out into the winter’s night beyond, never to be seen
again.
I don't which is scarier the woman or the case...you can fit a body quite nicely in some cases...so I've heard!
ReplyDeleteThe father was clearly cut up about this. A great tale Keith. This was clearly her last trip to the lake.
ReplyDeleteWow! Where did that come from? It is wonderfully descriptive for such a short tale. Sent chills through me.
ReplyDeleteIt's interesting the way Donald just appeared from no where at the tip of that chilling pointing finger, quite a thriller
ReplyDeleteHave a nice Sunday
Much love...
Ahh, we get way too comfortable when we think our secrets will never be discovered. Chilling tale, well told.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Chilling. A great read!
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