No
one saw him, but then very few people did. Not during the past few years.
Ebenezer Drewett watched from the back of the Ancient Chapel as Father
Flaggarty wandered this way and that, his arms piled high with prayer and hymn books
laying them on the pews in anticipation of the arrival of the Faithful Few. He
lit the lone candle at the centre of the simple alter, crossed himself then reached
inside his cassock for his cigarettes. Just time for a quick one before once
again carrying out the mission he was entrusted with.
Ebenezer
Drewett watched from the back of the Ancient Chapel as the Faithful Few meandered
in, pecking one another on the cheek and exchanging hushed pleasantries. Florence
‘Muddy’ Waters, James ‘Boozer’ Butterfield, Tommy ‘Two-timer’ Taylor and John
the Wobbler. Here they all come he thought to himself. He smiled as
the nicknames they’d been given in the past floated back into his mind. It
was all so long ago.
Mrs
Simmington started playing the wheezing organ; too loudly at first startling
the Faithful Few. There was a green hill far away they sang in differing keys at varying
levels of volume. Ebenezer Drewett shook his head as he remembered all the
deeds they needed to pray for in the hope of eternal salvation should such a
thing exist. Hypocrites the lot of them.
‘The
Blood of Christ’whispered Father Flaggarty as he administered the blessed wine
to each of the kneeling Faithful Few. James Butterfield was looking forward to
something a little stronger, and Tommy Taylor offered up a silent prayer in the
hope of sometime soon gaining the affection of Miriam Ramsbottom who knelt meekly
beside him. They had no idea that Ebenezer Drewett had discovered all their
secrets. How could they?
‘In
the name of the Father, the Son and the Holy Ghost’ said Father Flaggarty. ‘Amen’
muttered the Faithful Few before wandering off.
Ebenezer
Drewett stayed unseen at back of the Ancient Chapel until it was empty. The
last sound he heard was the clonk of the weatherbeaten door as Father Flaggarty
headed off to the Inn.
When
Ebenezer Drewett went outside into the falling rain he could just make out the
image of an Old Woman sitting cross-legged beside a gravestone. He moved towards
her. She wore a ragged grey cape, and a white stick rested on her lap. As he
approached, the Old Woman slowly turned her head towards him. Her face was as
grey as the gravestone and her eyes little more than empty sockets. 'But nobody
sees me' said Ebenezer Drewett 'and in any case Old Woman you are blind'. Her bony
fingers started feeling the carved out lettering on the crooked headstone. ‘Ebenezer
Drewett RIP’ it spelt. ‘You shouldn't be here' the Old Woman said. 'You don't deserve to Rest In Peace'. With that
her eyes began to glow blood red. She slowly raised herself up and took
Ebenezer Drewett by the hand. ‘Come with
me’ the Old Woman said. ‘You don’t belong here. Leave them be’. That was the last
time Ebenezer Drewett ever went to the Ancient Chapel.
Good...I think he was a shady character in need of his own exorcism...although old blind ladies waiting near gravestones...also shiver...wonderful flash..as ever!
ReplyDeleteLove this story. For a short piece, you created some remarkable characters.
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That was astonishing to read - what a fascinating story you wove around those 12 words.
ReplyDeleteThis really intrigues me. You are very good at sucking us in. Is there more to come in this one?
ReplyDeleteYou certainly have that knack of illustrating your writing with wonderful characters and images. So Ebenezer had avoided retribution for a few years, good on him for trying! So shall I!
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