Written for Magpie Tales
There were not many people at Gerald’s funeral. A couple of
neighbours, three or four folk from his church and his health visitor . He had
lived alone for years and although everyone around him did what they could for
him, he never really seemed grateful .
There was however
one person at the chapel whom nobody had seen before. Tall , expensively suited
and with a skin the colour of polished mahogany . His gentle smile lit up the
miserable grey walls and the leaden sky which peered through the chapel
windows .
*
Thirty or so years ago , Gerald had been a manager at a gold mine
in Africa . There, the local men toiled and laboured taking home a meagre wage ,
day in day out , year after miserable year . One evening after Gerald had
finished his shift he was wandering back to his hut when he witnessed the
appalling sight of a man raping a local girl . Had she not been wearing a bright
yellow coloured garment he might never have noticed her . He was however too
late to prevent the ghastly crime , and the guilt he felt for not being there
minutes earlier haunted him for many a long month .
As a result the girl had conceived and in the following spring
gave birth to a healthy baby boy . So moved was Gerald that he made a promise to
see that the mother and child were supported both physically and financially
for as long as he lived . Months later he returned to England and never saw them
again. His attempts to contact the girl and her baby were unfruitful , but still
he ensured that the financial help he had promised continued even though he
realised that the aid he was sending could well be falling into the wrong
hands .
*
A couple of weeks ago Gerald was lying in a hospital bed . He had
few visitors and those did sit at his bedside never felt that he was in any way
grateful for their visits . Then one afternoon a handsome young man strode up to
his bedside. He was tall, expensively suited and had skin the colour of
polished mahogany . His smile lit up the gloomy hospital ward and softened the
leaden sky which peered through the windows . Gerald knew at once who the young
man was, but was too weak to utter a single word .
‘My name is Gerald too’ said the visitor . ‘My Mother and I owe you
a debt we can never repay . You have given us everything , for which we will be
forever grateful . Yet I ask for one thing more . I simply ask that I be
permitted to call you Father . Gerald’s feeble smile was all the confirmation
the young man required .
*
At the graveside the gathered few scattered soil on Gerald’s
coffin as it was lowered into the ground. The young man cast in a piece of
bright yellow fabric . ‘Rest in peace Father’ he said .
hi, i really got caught up in your piece...thank you!
ReplyDeletevery nice piece...and a fine bit of story telling...really like that last painting too...touching end in the re-union...
ReplyDeleteOh dear, that made me cry. My Magpie this week is A Plot Both Great and Grand.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write...
ReplyDeleteReally touching.
ReplyDeleteGrateful....what a beautiful story Keith!
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What a beautiful story...
ReplyDeleteA beautiful story very well told!!
ReplyDeletebrilliant story telling ... loved it so much.
ReplyDeleteWhat a moving story. Beautifully told.
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