She hadn’t needed to answer it. There would only
ever be one call made on this phone then she’d lose it as quickly as she’d got
it. Without turning on the bedroom light she fumbled her way over to the
window, opened the curtains the merest bit and strained her eyes to look out
into the pitch black of the winter’s night. There was not a sound coming from
the sheep in field opposite the cottage, and she hoped and prayed that they
would not be disturbed by her leaving the house in the early hours of the
morning. Had there been a moon she would at least be able to see where he was
waiting. Then she spotted a tiny orange glow, the light from a cigarette. She
hadn’t realised he smoked, he’d certainly not done so in her company so her
strong feelings on the subject had never come up. Still, if he was a
smoker it would a small price to pay. Sonya was besotted with him even though
they had only met two or three times; love at first sight was something she’d
never believed in until this week.
She grabbed her small pre packed bag of essentials,
eased open the bedroom door praying it wouldn’t creak then slowly and silently
descended the narrow staircase. Only two bolts and a door lock stood
between her and her new life. The first one slid effortlessly aside. She held
her breath as she twisted the key. Not a sound. Sensing freedom she bent down
to release the bottom bolt, but it refused to budge. She pulled it a little
harder. Nothing. Her heart began to beat a little faster; she was aware of
moisture forming on her top lip.
Suddenly it crashed open with a deafening bang and
she caught the flesh of her finger between the bolt and its barrel. It was
agonising; in the darkness she could feel blood trickling across her palm. She
waited making not a sound, expecting to hear James wake up and leave the spare
room to investigate. But remarkably, he didn’t.
As she pulled open the heavy oak door it let
out a disapproving groan, as if were trying to tell her something, but it
wouldn’t have mattered if he had heard it, because within seconds she was
running as fast as her shaking legs would carry her in the direction of the
orange glow. She couldn’t understand why Sam wasn’t walking towards her. She
glanced over her shoulder at the cottage and as she did so the light in the
spare room flashed on. She stopped and turned, and for the first time in days
she asked herself what on earth she thought she was doing. It was then she
realised that the face watching her from the window was not her husband James.
It was Sam. She turned to face the field and the light from the window was
illuminating a figure smoking a cigarette and holding cell phone. He was
smiling. Not a pleasant smile, more a menacing one. She had never seen James
look like that before.
James had been planning to leave Sonya for some
time. He was a man of means and before they married he drew up a prenuptial
agreement. It was unusual inasmuch as it stated that in the event of Sonya
leaving him at her instigation, then she would be entitled to none of his
estate. On the other hand, should he leave he would have to share everything he
owned with her. He therefore had to find a way parting without it being his
fault. Unbeknown to her he’d arranged at some considerable expense for her to
bump into several eligible men over the past year or so. It was Sam that
managed to work the magic. He’d persuaded her that once they were together
she’d have no need for James’ money. But of course, she was never to see him
again. And James had been careful to cover his tracks making it nigh impossible
for him to be accused of anything untoward. It was Sonya’s word against his and
his accomplice Sam; or so they thought.
The call came three years later. It was from her
solicitor. It was good news!
Ha! Devilishly creative.
ReplyDeleteHaving crushed my right index finger on opening a door a few months back I am with Sonya. I would still like to know how she got away with it other than tracing the call on her cell phone which would show he set her up. Great read.
ReplyDeleteBrutally clever!
ReplyDeleteTricksy, clever writing..makes you want to light a cigarette after reading..inhale the satisfaction..Jae
ReplyDeleteThis is so crisp and intriguing. Enjoyable read!
ReplyDeleteThis is great writing and an intelligent tale. I would cast my vote for James as the more deplorable of the two main characters.
ReplyDeleteExcellent story. I love the creative twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteMelanie