Sunday, May 16, 2010

I gave you the key

I try not to repeat my posts too often, but this weeks prompt from Writers Island, the key, tempted me to break my rule! So here goes!








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11 comments:

  1. Marja17 May 2010, 02:08:00

    Excellent Keith I love the ending
    "not the lock on my soul" very clever

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  2. Stan Ski17 May 2010, 03:11:00

    We can open our hearts, but the soul takes a special combination to unlock.

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  3. Linda17 May 2010, 04:54:00

    Short, sweet and to the point. Bravo.

    http://lindagoin.com/

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  4. Mona17 May 2010, 18:38:00

    that is a profound piece!

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  5. Annie Jeffries17 May 2010, 22:26:00

    Darn straight, Keith!!

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  6. Whitesnake18 May 2010, 00:29:00

    an oldie but a goodie.

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  7. Unknown18 May 2010, 01:51:00

    That last line packs the punch!

    Nice.

    ps We miss Carry On Tuesday

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  8. brenda w18 May 2010, 17:46:00

    like it!

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  9. Anonymous18 May 2010, 19:26:00

    I love the way you take the cliché of the key to your heart and turn it upside down to the lock on your soul. I like concise poems like this very much.

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  10. Lucy19 May 2010, 22:56:00

    loved this Keith! xo

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  11. Mr. Walker18 Jun 2010, 19:17:00

    Concise and powerful - well done!

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