Friday, September 04, 2009

The key

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This weeks prompt on Sunday Scribblings is 'Key'.



22 comments:

  1. Pat4 Sept 2009, 09:28:00

    I like the poem very much.
    I'm sorry you are going to miss your friend Rosey but I'm sure she will stay in touch and come back again. Brave girl!

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  2. Jinksy4 Sept 2009, 09:38:00

    I love these two little verses! Serious underlying decleration of independence wrapped in humour.

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  3. Understanding Alice4 Sept 2009, 14:33:00

    Brilliant. To the point, well written and passionate, what more could you want :)

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  4. Granny Smith4 Sept 2009, 23:27:00

    What a wonderful take on the prompt! This is a delightful to-the-point poem.

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  5. 2cats5 Sept 2009, 00:02:00

    I really like this. The key to the soul, nicely put.

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  6. Rinkly Rimes5 Sept 2009, 01:46:00

    What a terrific poem! It says so much in so few words! And it's a truth we should all notice!

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  7. Lucy5 Sept 2009, 03:03:00

    Great little poem Keith!!
    And a good reminder to all the heartbroken out there.
    Nicely done!
    and what happened to Rosey??
    I've been MIA from blogging.

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  8. Marja5 Sept 2009, 09:38:00

    Very powerful Not the lock on my soul Your soul will roam free

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  9. Anonymous5 Sept 2009, 11:53:00

    And you can't beat me eh! Good for you Keith. You showed em. I always find something good from you in your sunday scribblings posts.

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  10. linda may5 Sept 2009, 11:54:00

    Oh opps, that last comment was from me, why am I anonymous?

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  11. gautami tripathy5 Sept 2009, 12:38:00

    I like this. Touching verse.

    I hold myself in the doorway

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  12. George S Batty5 Sept 2009, 14:40:00

    your on your way back old friend I can feel your spirit growing

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  13. if6 Sept 2009, 01:08:00

    lovely poem!

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  14. Dee Martin6 Sept 2009, 05:44:00

    this is wonderful Keith!

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  15. Patois426 Sept 2009, 16:01:00

    Excellent! That sounds quite hopeful.

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  16. Jennifer Hicks7 Sept 2009, 02:39:00

    I had shivers! well done!

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  17. Tammy Brierly8 Sept 2009, 01:57:00

    Well done Kieth!

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  18. Anonymous8 Sept 2009, 03:53:00

    Bang on!

    Loved how it ends...Not the lock on my soul....for sure!

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  19. Heliotropism9 Sept 2009, 05:36:00

    Short, simple, and to the point yet so eloquently written! BRAVO!

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  20. Bluebethley9 Sept 2009, 10:34:00

    Very fine poem that captures the essence of a relationship that goes step by step, heart to soul, if all goes well.

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  21. lrussian20 Sept 2009, 15:44:00

    Simple. Lovely. Elegant.

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  22. b21 Sept 2009, 01:23:00

    WOW...the perfect come back! Great.

    b

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