Sunday, November 30, 2008
A Winters Tale
The air was so cold that every breath was painful. It was as cold as a winter’s night could be. I walked down the twisting lane heeding every step less I should slip on the frost beneath my feet. Either side the grass on the banks stood rigid, white, frozen. Barren hedgerows glistened silver in the moonlight, and distant trees wove a border of black lace below a grey winter sky.
I trudged into the village. Six disgruntled ducks stood motionless on the frozen pond unable to reach the water beneath a surface of leaden ice. All was quiet but for the dull sound of my footsteps. Suddenly a bird flapped noisily into the air. I saw the shadow of a man, head bowed, deep in thought. It was mine.
As I turned the corner a golden glow filled the street before me. Quietly at first, then more loudly the sound of merriment and laughter filled the air. I had arrived. I pushed open the heavy oak door at once my spirits rose amid the sounds smells and warmth of the ancient inn.
“Mine's a brandy landlord, and make it a large one!”
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Very picturesque story with a nice ending.
ReplyDeleteLovely story - vivid imagery!
ReplyDeleteNothing better than a warming up drink on a cold day. Great piece. I loved to drink gluhwine walking over the market on a cold winterday
ReplyDeletenice ending! makes me crave a hot spicy mug! xo
ReplyDeleteNice! I could feel the cold in my bones!
ReplyDeleteyou have great images in your words.
ReplyDeleteHmmm, I shall say nought mate. Just sit here and smile!
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Ah, such a welcoming ending! I like your descriptions!
ReplyDeleteI especially love the six disgruntled ducks...great story!
ReplyDeletePut dark rum in my mug! Lovey winter scene!
ReplyDeleteHugs Giggles
Very nicely done Keith I love it.
ReplyDeleteI love the image of "disgruntled ducks"!
ReplyDeleteSounds like the perfect antidote to a cold winter walk. I love the sound of your feet in the snow.
ReplyDeleteVery vivid. Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteHi!
ReplyDeleteGreat story! Thanks for sharing. Thanks for stopping by my place. Take Care!!
Sherrie
all that and a drink at the end too!! and the ducks, brilliant :)
ReplyDeleteMy fingers were frozen by the end. Great visuals!
ReplyDeletewhat a vivid tale.. loved it!!
ReplyDeleteI was right there, freezing along with you and the disgruntled ducks.
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