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You whispered something in my ear
so softly I could hardly hear
You stroked my face as you passed by
as soft as silk your touch, but I
could not see you as you danced through
the trees and leaves, elusive breeze
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This is beautiful. Oh to whisper as softly as a breeze!
ReplyDeleteThat's very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLoved it Keith!
ReplyDeleteYou have expressed it so beautifully.
Your poem is the picture of romance without being romantic. Very nice and the picture part of Swirl is a nice touch also.
ReplyDeleteabsolutely beautiful!
ReplyDeleteVery very nice!
ReplyDeleteVery pleasant experience. thank you...
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done
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