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Farewell not goodbye
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Suddenly the lights of Paris seemed less bright. The laughter of minutes ago now a distant memory. Eyes that sparkled now dissolved down ashen cheeks.
She leaned from the gaping window and clutched his hand. Although close they felt a million miles apart, separated by the cold steel of the carriage door.
With a menacing roar the train began to inch its way down the platform. Slowly at first as if to prolong the agony of these final heart wrenching moments. He choked on his emotion, she sobbed and gasped as she tried to speak. But she couldn’t. He ran beside her holding on as long as he could until the path beneath his feet ended. The monster headed out into the night taking away his very reason for living.
Now he stood alone. The platform deserted. Alone with his thoughts. He heard her voice whispering in the chill of the midnight breeze. ‘Goodbye my love’ she said. He stared out into the darkness as tears of rain began falling from the sky. ‘Adieu mon amour’ he cried ‘Adieu - pas au revoir’
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as a fan of classic movies,, this one really fit the bill for me... i love the ending in french,, as a carryover from that post you did not long ago in french....
ReplyDeleteA beautiful nostalgia in this - going back to previous times, the emotion, the heartache.
ReplyDeleteExcellent.
Phew, that's SO romantic!
ReplyDeleteWeeping here. And this line?
ReplyDelete"Eyes that sparkled now dissolved down ashen cheeks."
Unmatched.