This weeks prompt on Pen Me A Poem is Birth
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His birth was long
his life but a brief moment in time
The act of a cruel God
or was it meant to be?
Her tears of pain
became tears of utter despair
Did her God forsake her
or was it meant to be?
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let me read it to you
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this is so beautiful, and painful too.
ReplyDeleteA very painful poem but which is very well crafted. It really hit the emotional level of my mind.
ReplyDeleteThe questioning at the end of each small verse is a great added touch.
this is such a sad,poignant poem...:(
ReplyDeleteand well written too
Great post. Somethings no matter how cruel or unfair they may seem sometimes they are for the best.
ReplyDeleteThis hit home for me as I have known several people who have had this happen.
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