'
sitting
quietly
in a corner
sobbing
tears
flowing
down her cheeks
alone
mind
searching
for a reason
confused
wondering
why
did he leave
suddenly
joy
happiness
now all gone
memories
crying
trembling
curled in a ball
inconsolable
others
ignore
it’s like she’s
invisible
quietly
in a corner
sobbing
tears
flowing
down her cheeks
alone
mind
searching
for a reason
confused
wondering
why
did he leave
suddenly
joy
happiness
now all gone
memories
crying
trembling
curled in a ball
inconsolable
others
ignore
it’s like she’s
invisible
spoken 'sobbing'
Ah.
ReplyDeleteI have been there more than once.
You have captured it.
really like the form.. compliments your poem so well... even better to hear it spoken.. well done day 2....
ReplyDeleteThat was very sad but so well expressed.
ReplyDeleteoh yes, superb job on day two, you are on a roll, this sobbing piece speaks volumes
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