Thursday, April 10, 2008

poem 11 - why?

. .
she went
but why?
no warning
no reason
no note

this morning
a kiss
goodbye
as usual
quite normal

her possessions
are gone
everything
except
her ring

she’s gone
but where?
with whom?
what
went wrong?
'

5 comments:

  1. Head Cookie11 Apr 2008, 01:14:00

    excellent post.

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  2. Prats11 Apr 2008, 01:38:00

    simple and so well conveyed.

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  3. Anonymous11 Apr 2008, 16:02:00

    Beautiful poem

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  4. Anonymous14 Apr 2008, 23:45:00

    test

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  5. UL29 Apr 2008, 08:02:00

    often it ends in 'why?' doesnt it? if only we leanrt to be more patient and tolerant of situations..

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