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This week we have been asked to write on our characters relationship with an animal.
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The Kitten
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She spent hour upon hour in her room. Just a few well-worn toys and a scattering of books for company. Whilst other eight year olds played outside, she curled up on her bed, hands pressed hard against her ears to blot out the sound of other children having fun. Hers was a dark lonely secret world.
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One day a tiny kitten leapt up onto her window ledge, squeezed through a gap and jumped down onto her pillow. The soft purring was the most comforting sound she had heard for years. The kitten snuggled up to her and for the first time in ages she drifted into a deep sleep.
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When she awoke the kitten was gone. It had been the nearest thing she had felt to happiness for many a long year.
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The next day it appeared again, and the next and the next and the next.
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Each morning and every night when the shadowy figure of her evil tormentor crept through her door she tried blotting out those terrible moments by imagining she was playing with her kitten in the garden.
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At last she had a friendly ear to confide in. She could whisper about her deepest fears and the life of misery she endured. And she knew it would go no further.
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That sweet innocent ball of fur was the only friend she had in the world.
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Sunday Scribblings has this week invited us to write on a subject from the back catalogue of prompts. I’ve chosen ‘In the Kitchen’
In the kitchen I am King! King of all I survey. The kitchen is my empire, my territory, my domain.
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I spend hour upon hour in the kitchen. Once I change into my pristine white uniform I am top dog, master and mentor.
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People come and go. Butchers, greengrocers, fishmongers and poachers. In the kitchen I conduct my business, I weal and deal, I pass cash under the counter!
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I have helpers in the kitchen. Some cook, some clean, some peel and chop, and one washes the pots.
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The kitchen is my consulting room, my advice centre, my surgery. I witness teenage angst, I advise on relationships, I stick blue plasters on cuts and gashes and I proffer a friendly ear to lost souls who have nowhere else to turn.
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The kitchen is my studio, my workshop and my laboratory. There I design, experiment, create and sometimes caramelise! Ok, burn. In the kitchen I am surrounded by cookery books, hastily written recipes and copies of old menus.
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The kitchen is where I receive orders from my hungry customers. Waitresses bring me little pieces of paper containing their orders. Some scribbled, some wordy and many illegible.
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In minutes the kitchen table is groaning with platters of steaming food, each one a product of my passion for all things gastronomic.
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At the end of service, I stand back, look around and tell myself how lucky I am to work in the kitchen.
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Then I close the door behind me, and with the sound of the day still ringing in my ears, I thank God it’s all over until tomorrow when I’ll have to bloody well do it all over again!
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For my second Sunday Scribble click here
Everyone needs a friend to listen to. Great story.
ReplyDeleteI see I'm going to have to buy Kleenex stock. Lovely, heartbreaking story.
ReplyDelete` That's so sad!!! Good thing kittens are so nice!
ReplyDeleteOh what a cute surprise for that poor child. Psst it was our new kitten mistyc I sent to her.
ReplyDeleteawwww, so cute.
ReplyDeleteBtw, I love your video message, it's so nice to hear your voice. You know I'll have to do one now!!!
The little girl and the kitten gave me chills.
ReplyDeleteI would have much prefered she was in that room due to an illness. The reason she was makes me cringe.
The real work never ends... I enjoyed this. ;)
ReplyDelete"The kitchen is my consulting room, my advice centre, my surgery. I witness teenage angst, I advise on relationships..." This was my favorite part, for some reason, it warmed my heart. I'll remember these words when things get to mundane, and I feel overworked in my kitchen.
ReplyDeleteYou got me with the kitchen one, so true, you have to have done it to get it! Ohhh the stories we could compare ;) Scrumptious description!
ReplyDeleteThat story is so very sweet. Children need reassurance from anywhere they can get.
ReplyDeleteI like your kitchen post too!
animal instinct
Kittens can be the best friends ever! As for kitchens, they really can be places where the real business of life occurs.
ReplyDelete'the shadowy figure of her evil tormentor'!!! Holy Cow Keith... just rip my heart out, why don't you?
ReplyDeleteThat brought to mind so many awful news stories.
On a much lighter note... Your Kitchen! I love it. It makes sense to me that that is where you spend your days. I have always associated love, home, warmth and good times with the kitchen
What a heartbreakingly sad story, the hands over her ears really got to me since my own daughter has sensory issues and often puts her fingers in her ears to block out the noise.
ReplyDeleteThe first was touching; very good. The second, you got it so right. One of my sons is a chef.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed how your two postings swept from sensitive, quiet drama to the raucous fanfare of kitchen gusto!
ReplyDeleteRefreshing contrasts!
Gemma
"and sometimes caramelise" I loved that :)
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you're happy in the kitchen; make sure you send me some meals through the mail some time...I agree that it gets very repetitive day after day...
a chef who is actually happy to be in the kitchen is a rarity ,, after 30 years in the restaurant industry i can honestly say i have known but two... it is good to hear you are in live with being there,, i know it must be a pleasure to serve on the other side of your line.....
ReplyDeleteSounds like your kitchen is a smorgasborg and you managed two prompts in one. Clever.
ReplyDeleteYour kitchen works is like a well-choreographed dance! Fun read!
ReplyDeleteThe kitten story is chilling. It starts out all sweet and innocent, I thought she was sick, and then wham, you introduce her captor. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI agree with chefdruck. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by my FF; glad you liked the zoo poem.
Ohhh...u've done it again...a sad story followed by an uplifting one...
ReplyDeletethe first one was so chilling, so sad....its true, that's what makes it hit you hard
your kitchen seems warm and homely...nice read....
the images you created with your kitchen post were vivid . I felt like i was there. bravo!
ReplyDeleteLove your kitchen scene. I cannot imagine that and have wondered how restaurants manage to have food on hand for a multitude of orders. Neat post - I like your conversational style!
ReplyDeleteDelightful SS post. Love the thought of being a master in the kitchen.
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