.
‘Let’s play pirates’ said John to Jack
‘Let’s pretend the garden's an island.
Let’s look for treasure,
there’s bound to be some.
Let’s get a spade and a sack’
'Twelve steps forward and two steps right.
Look for a bush and hide'.
‘We have to be quiet,
don’t make a noise.
Look out for something that's bright’.
‘Watch out - a tiger’ says Jack to John
Cat stops and stares then walks off
‘I see a parrot
there in the hedge’
A gull flapped its wings and was gone.
Crawling round on their hands and their knees
They look for a probable spot
‘This is the place
I know that it is’
Hidden by bushes and trees.
They made a big hole, and burrowed and dug
And pulled out the stuff that they found.
Rusty old nails
A bit of a plate
A handle that fell off a mug.
‘When dad sees this mess he won’t be pleased.
He’ll make us walk the plank.
‘cos yesterday
he planted seeds
and now we’ve dug them up!
‘Let’s pretend the garden's an island.
Let’s look for treasure,
there’s bound to be some.
Let’s get a spade and a sack’
'Twelve steps forward and two steps right.
Look for a bush and hide'.
‘We have to be quiet,
don’t make a noise.
Look out for something that's bright’.
‘Watch out - a tiger’ says Jack to John
Cat stops and stares then walks off
‘I see a parrot
there in the hedge’
A gull flapped its wings and was gone.
Crawling round on their hands and their knees
They look for a probable spot
‘This is the place
I know that it is’
Hidden by bushes and trees.
They made a big hole, and burrowed and dug
And pulled out the stuff that they found.
Rusty old nails
A bit of a plate
A handle that fell off a mug.
‘When dad sees this mess he won’t be pleased.
He’ll make us walk the plank.
‘cos yesterday
he planted seeds
and now we’ve dug them up!
For Treasure part 1 click here!
heh...heh...now this does bring an image of my two boys at the beach...they dug up so many treasures that i had to leave some behind...
ReplyDeletei loved this...keith...another one for the yet to be published collection ;)
haha.. i am still laughing.. this was sooo cute!! Sounds like something my son would do..
ReplyDeleteThat was a wonderful take on the topic.. I loved the spirit the pace and the story in the poem!! Lovely!!!
The Treasure
LOL I love this post very much and I can see that these kids treasures are right there with them in their imaginations and not to mention Dad's garden. Great piece.
ReplyDeletejust came back to say that i so could not believe when you said that you never read till you were 40...well, all i can say, finally there is hope for my husband! :)
ReplyDeleteOh kids are living in such an adventure word. You cptured that treasure very well. Happy to read your treasures again. Hop quickly to part 1
ReplyDeleteVery well said, Keith!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat little work of art!
I know those boys - but they are midddle aged men now. Thank you for your visit Keith and I hope you can find your way back.
ReplyDeletePat
ha! this was wonderful!
ReplyDeleteOhmigosh! What fun this is! A big smile - full of treasure, it is!
ReplyDeleteSo much fun reading this - and the photo is adorable. Your post is a treasure!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this - especially the last verse.
ReplyDeletehaha!! that is soo cute and funny! Totally brought back my 3 monkeys always playing dress up, always digging into something they shouldn't!
ReplyDeleteChildren and their imaginations... Certainly treasures. :))
LOL Delightful!
ReplyDeleteFun poem!
ReplyDeleteGreat!!
ReplyDeleteheh heh! Lovely!! Reminded me of R.L.Stevenson's poems.
ReplyDeleteOh what a lovely treasure this poem is ... I found myself smiling from ear to ear as my mind filled up with happy childhood memories
ReplyDeleteThank you for that
Fenny
Adorable, I could see this read as a
ReplyDeletebedtime story with lovely illustrations! It was magical, with a giggle at the end!
Hugs Sherrie
heh hehe....so perfect....boys day out !! Am still giggling thinking of the kids at work on their treasure....
ReplyDeleteVery nice...oh to be young and carefree again..sure makes me want to be a child :)
ReplyDeleteNice one Keith, that takes me back to my dressing up days - I'm still smiling now!
ReplyDeleteThat was a fun story. I need to go read part 1.
ReplyDeleteChildren are treasures and your poem proves that. Reminds me of those two rascals of mine.
ReplyDeleteS
that was good...made me laugh...the pic definitely enhanced your poem..being a garden i would be very upset too!!!
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